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《Two Straight Lines》|Re:《五个字留给自己》(@我的大缅因猫叫Tiger)

暮子默 2024-10-05 15:01:49 ( reads)

这是我前两周写的一首歌《两条直线》。中文原版我已经送人了,没法贴出来。但我昨天听了大猫的《五个字留给自己》,没忍住,决定贴这首歌的英文版,从女性视角写了两人关系摇摇欲坠时的那种无力、疲惫和心碎。这下子,一对为爱所苦的痴情男女就到齐了(^_-)。

Two Straight Lines

Lyrics: Mu,Zimo Music&Vocals:Suno

I chase, you run, we're pulling tight
Exhausted, is there any hope in sight?
Another fight that’s mine alone
Your silence feels like a wall of stone
Ooh~
Trapped in pain, with memories to hold
The last sweet moments, now growing cold

In the quiet room, I lie awake
My tears fall, but you don’t see my pain
You turn away, no words to share
Leaving nothing but silence in the air

Oh~
I just wish we could grow and heal
Be the ones who stand and never fail
I keep asking why we drift away
Why can't we go back to yesterday?
Oh~

I thought we were a perfect pair
But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere
Oh~
I just wish we could grow and heal
Be the ones who stand and never fail
I keep asking why we drift away
Why can't we go back to yesterday?
Hmm~

I thought we were a perfect pair
But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere
Oh~
I just wish we could grow and heal
Be the ones who stand and never fail
Despite my efforts, I...
I thought we were a perfect pair
But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere
Oh~

I just wish we could grow and heal
Be the ones who stand and never fail
Despite my efforts, I just can’t see
How I can make a miracle for you and me
I thought we were a perfect pair
But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere

 

跟帖(20)

艾唱

2024-10-05 15:19:45

从词到曲儿到小苏的演绎,这都是一首很完整完美的作品,很喜欢很有feel,赞子墨和小苏!

艾唱

2024-10-05 15:43:53

片片拍的也很美很美哦!

暮子默

2024-10-05 16:02:19

谢谢小艾夸奖~ 争取学习更多厉害的新技能写更多好听的歌曲。:-)

艾唱

2024-10-05 16:22:52

不客气哦,一起加油,共同进步。

我的大缅因猫叫Tiger

2024-10-05 15:37:44

好有感觉的一首英文歌曲,看来我的歌把你的歌招来了啊。我觉得Suno的英文歌比中文歌更有感觉,可能因为是它的母语。

暮子默

2024-10-05 15:55:07

其实我更喜欢中文原版,也非常非常有Feel,那种无力感和破碎感更强

我的大缅因猫叫Tiger

2024-10-05 15:58:47

谢谢分享。很想听一下。

暮子默

2024-10-05 18:08:13

不客气,希望你喜欢!

艾唱

2024-10-05 17:41:46

我一般就是加好多的形容词,给他更多的选择,然后我也可以多些选择。

暮子默

2024-10-05 18:29:52

我以前也和你这样,可是

艾唱

2024-10-05 18:34:50

学习了:)

麦迪文

2024-10-06 08:34:11

什么是送人没法贴?被商业录通了?歌曲有点小霉霉的感觉 好听

暮子默

2024-10-06 09:12:58

没有作为商用 :-P 就是……

老地雷

2024-10-06 10:50:02

你的电台应该很火了吧,感觉超级好的,SUNO唱英文歌就是好~可以多搞英文歌

暮子默

2024-10-06 12:01:48

谢谢地雷!电台慢慢有一些人在听

西门东瓜

2024-10-06 12:54:21

很好听,撕扯纠缠终成遗憾平行线也许是又一段成长的起点

暮子默

2024-10-06 13:13:46

谢瓜兄好评!:-)

天山晨

2024-10-06 16:28:40

好听的E歌!词曲唱都很有感觉!

暮子默

2024-10-06 19:11:58

谢谢天山的鼓励~!(*^_^*)

还依

2024-10-08 09:40:54

很好听,很赞你和猫猫的一对怨女痴男~