Slanted light on a shrine in the wall

Slanted light on a shrine in the wall

A shrine in a wall
silent and worn
ignored by a nomad
He leans on the wall
and dozes at dusk
But the dying sunlight
pulled and slanted by the shrine
shines on the shrine and his face

 

© 21 hours ago

 
 

Likes: Iffat Yasmin

Iffat Yasmin - Good write painting a mysterious picture, had to imagine the scene to enjoy the write the last 2 lines bring the whole picture to life making it meaningful

Clever piece

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• 不太懂shrine in a wall.shrine 是个建筑/结构可以包含n面墙。wall in a shrine -移花接木- ♂ (23 bytes) () 08/07/2022 postreply 08:14:29

• 谢谢，mini 的 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2022 postreply 14:44:51

• 太细腻了。 -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2022 postreply 09:04:44

• 谢谢110 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2022 postreply 14:45:11

• 很棒。周末愉快。 -chuntianle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2022 postreply 12:33:01

• 谢谢 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2022 postreply 14:44:38

• 哈哈 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2022 postreply 16:47:13

• 能这样安静写诗真好 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/08/2022 postreply 16:26:32