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Frederick Seidel's Snow

CBA7 2024-01-25 21:38:03 ( reads)

Frederick Seidel's Snow
by CBA7

I read it and melt it and drink it.
It stays in my blood.
It beats in my heart.
It floods my mind and never goes.

弗雷德里克·赛德尔的《雪》
by CBA7

我读《雪》,融化它,喝它。
它在我的血里停留。
它在我的心里跳动。
它充斥着我的脑海,永不消失。

P.S. My poem was inspired by reading the poem below.


Snow 
by Frederick Seidel

Snow is what it does.
It falls and it stays and it goes.
It melts and it is here somewhere.
We all will get there.

 

相关链接:美坛活动【Poem Reading Tuesday】Snow by Frederick Seidel - CBA7发表于 美语世界 - 论坛 | 文学城 (wenxuecity.com)

 


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妖妖灵

2024-01-25 22:20:23

这个诗人的snow融化在血液里,凝结在每个细胞上了:)其实我也在扩充我的snow,看能不能变成歌词~

移花接木

2024-01-26 04:49:43

Beware hypothermia,

CBA7

2024-01-26 08:49:43

哈哈,不用担心!Frederick 的《雪》诗化成雪水后,喝了它,全身发热 ,激发灵感 :)

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-26 06:39:10

期待。:)

CBA7

2024-01-26 08:40:36

同期待!

CBA7

2024-01-26 08:41:26

谢谢灵灵点评和分享。

renqiulan

2024-01-26 06:29:22

Good morning, everyone! Imagism is all the rage these days.

renqiulan

2024-01-26 06:31:36

No one would or should let snow go. Snow, please stay.

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-26 06:36:33

You sounds like Olaf, don’t you? haha

renqiulan

2024-01-26 13:10:09

Call me Olaf. I'm melting,by the way, because you're a warm,

renqiulan

2024-01-26 13:14:25

friendly and inspiring moderator. MYSJ lets us enjoy the

renqiulan

2024-01-26 13:16:43

comforts of hearth and home away from our hearths and homes.

renqiulan

2024-01-26 13:19:26

小西, I need more of your snow. I'm melting really fast.

CBA7

2024-01-26 20:01:34

Hahaha, Olaf is a whitle spirit, blue spirit can help! :)

renqiulan

2024-01-26 06:41:13

Poets always have faith in snow even when it melts.

renqiulan

2024-01-26 06:42:47

BTW, snow never melts in poets' dreams, I guess.

renqiulan

2024-01-26 06:46:11

When snow melts into a running river,let's go with the flow.

renqiulan

2024-01-26 06:55:03

Poetry is a river's journey, in my humble opinion.

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-26 07:03:08

Poetic expression!It makes me think of a song “the river “

CBA7

2024-01-26 08:59:57

Yes! Poetry is free like a river, led by our imagination.

CBA7

2024-01-26 08:57:14

That's so ture!

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-26 06:34:00

Good morning 秋兰!Happy Friday!

renqiulan

2024-01-26 06:35:14

Happy Friday! Have a great weekend, 盈盈 !

CBA7

2024-01-26 08:54:47

Good morning, 秋兰!谢谢你的美言和鼓励,我只是跟着自己的感觉走而已 :)

renqiulan

2024-01-26 13:24:05

You'll blaze a trail every time you have a bright idea.

renqiulan

2024-01-26 13:28:49

Keep the light on.

CBA7

2024-01-27 10:07:27

不敢当,秋兰太过奖了,谢谢秋兰的鼓励。

renqiulan

2024-01-26 06:34:14

Kudos to 小西 !

CBA7

2024-01-26 09:01:26

Thank you, 秋兰,Have a great weekend!

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-26 06:38:03

It floods my mind and never goes. Awesome!!

renqiulan

2024-01-26 06:52:34

The fate of snow is in the hands of poets. Good heavens!

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-26 07:28:28

雪的命运。我又想起Frederick Seidel的原诗snow 了。

CBA7

2024-01-26 09:10:31

So true and deep! Thank you for sharing your great thought.

CBA7

2024-01-26 09:06:23

盈盈,you're Awesome, you read my mind :)

CBA7

2024-01-26 12:27:33

盈盈周末愉快!

godog

2024-01-26 07:55:35

Creative idea and nice poem!

CBA7

2024-01-26 09:18:05

Yes, you got it! My "goes" is "goes away".

CBA7

2024-01-26 09:55:10

Go兄,我刚才把中文版加上了,就更容易理解了。

CBA7

2024-01-26 09:55:59

Thank you for your nice comment and encouragement.

CBA7

2024-01-26 08:07:34

Frederick Seidel的《雪》令我回味无穷,他的这首诗就像融化了的雪一样,融入了我的身心,在脑海中挥之不去。

CBA7

2024-01-26 08:14:17

我的这首小诗是灵感一现的时候以诗的形式写的一篇《雪》的读后感,

CBA7

2024-01-26 08:22:33

我诗中的"it"是一语双关,既指Frederick的这首《雪》诗,也指他诗中所写的大自然中的雪。

蓝灵

2024-01-26 22:13:10

Snowflakes have found their home in your poem.

CBA7

2024-01-27 10:10:59

Thank you for your beautiful words, blue spirit!