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【Snow】English lyrics

妖妖灵 2024-01-27 10:58:57 ( reads)

摄影: 移花接木

 

I have just completed the English lyrics of “Snow” that expanded from my last poem “Snow”.https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/303044.html

I'm very excited as it is my first completed English lyrics!

Thanks to friends in MYSJ for inspiring me to achieve it.

I am going to pay more attention to the syllables when I compose the melody. 

Hopefully, I will be able to complete the song this year. 
 

Snow  by 妖妖灵

 

Pure snow is like my pure love 

dancing from the purple sky above

Holding the snowflake lightly

It will melt your heart lake slightly

 

At this moment,just wanna dance with you

with the snow dancing in the air

At this moment,just wanna fly with you

with the snow whitening our black hair

 

Snow is like musical notes 

performing the melody that floats

Snow is like butterfly kisses

Clinging to the lashes that never misses 

 

At this moment, just wanna sing with you

with the snow singing in the air

At this moment, just wanna fly with you

with the snow whitening our black hair

 

A snowflake is a world of crystal

and within each hexagon

a world of an ice heart 

 

 


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跟帖(39)

移花接木

2024-01-27 11:16:06

But where is the rhythm? Is melody floating in ur heart?

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 11:19:54

心中有旋律,就能听到旋律,就是风吹过雪的声音:)

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 11:21:10

雪花像音符,漫天的雪花多么像sheet music啊:)

移花接木

2024-01-27 11:31:20

I hate to say but the song deserves a much better backdrop p

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 11:33:58

Thanks for ur suggestions. Would that be too many words?

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 11:35:26

哈哈,看见你一笑,明白了。有好的吗?

移花接木

2024-01-27 13:57:08

in the land of the blind, the one-eyed man is king

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 14:13:32

Nice color and looks like real!搬走啦!Thanks!

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 14:18:35

Still keep the original as it was snowing at that moment

移花接木

2024-01-27 11:23:08

song doesnt have2 rhyme, but rhyme does make great song

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 11:30:37

Agreed. I have to spend much more thinking on rhyming.

暖冬cool夏

2024-01-27 12:13:25

Snow is like butterfly kisses,+1,很棒!

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 12:25:08

谢谢暖冬mm鼓励!这个butterfly kiss还是以前看虫虫写的英文故事知道的:)

万湖小舟

2024-01-27 12:55:21

写得好,学习了。歌词把人带入了一位在雪花中翩翩起舞,人和自然融为一体的画面。很赞。

万湖小舟

2024-01-27 13:11:33

起舞后面漏了两个字,应为起舞的公主。

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 13:34:55

谢谢小舟诗人鼓励:)对了,我的歌词里有 heart lake ,这么用违和吗?:)

万湖小舟

2024-01-27 14:54:02

不客气哈。讨论一下,汉语里有人用“心湖一泓”,来表示心境如水,清澈宽广。重点在于心。英语里heart lake,

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 15:02:37

诗人一解释我明白多了,那是否lake of your heart或去掉lake。谢谢表扬英语,真是开心,泡坛真是管用啊

万湖小舟

2024-01-27 15:19:57

去掉lake, 可能简单明了些。

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 15:32:36

好,原来还想着更押韵些,现在把lake去掉了:)

移花接木

2024-01-27 15:47:32

请问作为歌词,a1与a2段的最后一句能否共用同一段旋律?a2那句长很多

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 16:01:31

应该是差不多一样的旋律,看来还得把the lake of your heart 加上:)

移花接木

2024-01-27 16:03:28

我原就以为lake是space holder

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 16:06:53

我原来也是这么想,心湖,那就接着加上?:)

移花接木

2024-01-27 16:09:48

啊?问我?我哪里懂,Melody在你心中啊,或许旋律出来后如果需要再调整?

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 16:13:24

好,那就先这样,等我写出旋律~

waterfowl

2024-01-27 16:33:50

#3!

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 17:57:19

谢谢大师!我也很喜欢:)

godog

2024-01-27 18:29:21

Nice lyrics, look forward to hearing the song

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 18:45:58

Thanks. That is my next goal:)

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-27 19:37:57

Snow is like musical notes performing the melody that float

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-27 19:38:37

NICE!

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 20:00:56

Thanks to 盈盈!因为你期待,我写完歌词就贴出来了:)

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-28 10:53:04

美坛是个学习坛,我更关心的是学习内容。所以比起歌词,我更期待妖妖的新概念英语能继续,一起学。:)

妖妖灵

2024-01-28 11:52:09

能写英文歌是我在美坛的一个梦想,可惜以前水平不够,边玩边学了三年,现在总算写出来了~新概念我是真学不动了,再学肯定要吐了

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-28 16:16:39

在美坛实现梦想。Yayyyy! :))

CBA7

2024-01-27 22:00:38

Nice work, 灵灵!Looking forward to your first English song!

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 22:18:06

Thanks,小西!If u werenot holding the poem reading event,if

CBA7

2024-01-29 08:22:26

My pleasure :)