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Sunshine After A Long Stretch of Gloomy Days. 久阴转晴

godog 2024-01-27 18:19:34 ( reads)

【七律】久阴转晴

 

城南城北万窗清,霁后苍天必有情。

雾散群山山再现,云凝多日日终明。

时光足迹辨犹湿,造化春芽觅已生。

每诵凉州词未尽,还邀春梦度沙城。

 

Sunshine After A long Stretch of Gloomy Days

 

Thousands of windows in the city turned bright,

through them came joy and delight.

Even the mood of the sky has changed.

When the day is fair, the sky does care.

 

The fog has dispersed.

The mountains have reappeared.

Many days of dense clouds, endless rain.

Finally, the sun rises again.

 

If you have been through snow, through rain,

through sunflower's petals being torn,

you would know that waves and particles

of time's light will be reborn.

 

Every time I recite the poem that asserts

the spring wind won't ever come to deserts,

I don't believe that's what it really means.

There's gonna be new things in Sun's new beams.

 

While time's footprints are still wet,

Nature is geminating a new spring.

I'll invite spring dreams to my sandy city,

for one thing, one thing only: to make it pretty.

 

(© January 27, 2024, godog)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

跟帖(16)

妖妖灵

2024-01-27 18:44:50

感受到这次的押韵!雨霁初晴的画面呈现!好神奇,中文的八句,为什么英文变成了五个stanza

godog

2024-01-27 23:59:48

因为最初的第三联是不一样的,诗坛有老师说它弱了些,我自己也不满意,后来就改成了现在的样子,英文版结合了两个版本

妖妖灵

2024-01-28 12:01:32

哈哈,我怎么更喜欢这个版本,言简意赅~ 我觉得容易理解 深入浅出的更能持久吧~

waterfowl

2024-01-27 19:10:08

Lovely poem, lovely sentiments.

godog

2024-01-28 00:00:39

Thank you for your encouragement!

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-27 19:27:32

While time's footprints are still wet, Nature is geminating

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-27 19:27:43

自自然然,轻轻松松

godog

2024-01-28 00:00:59

谢谢盈盈

暖冬cool夏

2024-01-27 20:46:49

Love it! Both Chinese and English poems are brilliant!

godog

2024-01-28 00:01:40

Thank you for your words of encouragement!

方外居士

2024-01-27 20:47:57

再读再赞!

godog

2024-01-28 00:02:04

再谢方兄

暖冬cool夏

2024-01-27 20:50:36

写出了霁后天晴的景、情,阳光的明媚、春的脚步,英文特别flow!中文诗一如既往得好!

godog

2024-01-28 00:03:04

谢谢暖冬一如既往的鼓励

CBA7

2024-01-27 22:07:48

Go兄双语好诗,谢谢分享。

godog

2024-01-28 00:03:28

谢谢小西鼓励