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After Kitty Ate Doggy's Brain

CBA7 2024-01-30 08:58:56 ( reads)

After Kitty Ate Doggy's Brain
by CBA7

After kitty ate doggy's brain,
doggy said in kitty's dream:
"There is no such thing!"

P.S. My little poem was inspired by the poem below.


My Doggy Ate My Essay
by Darren Sardelli

My doggy ate my essay.
He picked up all my mail.
He cleaned my dirty closet
and dusted with his tail.
 
He straightened out my posters
and swept my wooden floor.
My parents almost fainted
when he fixed my bedroom door.
 
I did not try to stop him.
He made my windows shine.
My room looked like a palace,
and my dresser smelled like pine.
 
He fluffed up every pillow.
He folded all my clothes.
He even cleaned my fish tank
with a toothbrush and a hose.
 
I thought it was amazing
to see him use a broom.
I'm glad he ate my essay
on“How to Clean My Room.”

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移花接木

2024-01-30 09:12:37

Does the cat start barking?

CBA7

2024-01-30 09:14:18

No such thing, so no barking! 哈哈哈!

盈盈一笑间

2024-01-30 09:46:20

噗~~haha

CBA7

2024-01-30 10:19:12

Hahaha, 盈盈,you got it! I'm glad it makes you laugh :)

永远老李

2024-01-30 10:20:26

我知道烫火锅的菜里有猪。脑花

CBA7

2024-01-30 10:22:25

哈哈哈,谢谢老李分享!

颤音

2024-01-30 10:49:00

hhhh, as humorous as the original

CBA7

2024-01-30 11:34:44

颤音好,thank you for reading and commenting!

godog

2024-01-30 11:46:55

哈哈,这只狗是在自嘲地说,“我没脑子。”:))

CBA7

2024-01-30 11:51:31

My point is,小狗告诉小猫:“Kitty Ate Doggy's Brain" 这件事情不存在!

godog

2024-01-30 11:58:46

Your poem is unleashed now.People can interpret it any way:)

CBA7

2024-01-30 12:10:57

Yes, you're right! Thank you for sharing your feedback!

CBA7

2024-01-30 12:12:39

喜欢Go兄的这个解读,有创意!

甜虫虫

2024-01-30 14:54:40

Very clever! Enjoyed reading it :)

CBA7

2024-01-30 21:18:08

Thank you, 虫虫!

暖冬cool夏

2024-01-30 15:15:04

Very imaginative:)

CBA7

2024-01-30 21:18:52

谢谢冬夏点评鼓励。

renqiulan

2024-01-30 15:45:12

Haha! That's quite a brain teaser, poetically speaking.

renqiulan

2024-01-30 15:50:22

BTW,isn't it raining cats & dogs in your neck of the woods?

CBA7

2024-01-30 21:19:55

Hahaha, maybe :) 谢谢秋兰!

妖妖灵

2024-01-30 18:17:33

Was the kitten a tiger cub?

CBA7

2024-01-30 21:21:13

Hahaha, I have no idea. As you wish :)

蓝灵

2024-01-30 19:43:23

It is a new kind of brain drain.

CBA7

2024-01-30 21:24:21

Hahaha, good point!