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When Fire Runs into Ice

CBA7 2024-02-06 09:37:32 ( reads)

When Fire Runs into Ice
by CBA7

When fire runs into ice
Your words make them talk without fears

When fire talks with ice
Your smile makes them dance in peace

When fire dances with ice
Your heart makes them kiss
and forget they were enemies

P.S. My poem was inspired by the title of the poem below, but my fire and ice are not Frost's fire and ice :)


Fire and Ice
by Robert Frost

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

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盈盈一笑间

2024-02-06 09:44:07

When Fire Runs into Ice… Cool ~~

7grizzly

2024-02-06 09:52:56

What a feeling! An exquisite taste. Love the contrast. :-)

CBA7

2024-02-06 10:29:56

Thank you for your nice comment and encouragement.

CBA7

2024-02-06 10:24:51

Hahaha, fire and ice were enemies! 不是冤家不聚头,冤家路窄,狭路相逢!

永远老李

2024-02-06 09:45:39

冰火两重天?

CBA7

2024-02-06 10:35:12

是的,冰火是对立的,在我的这首诗里代表“仇敌”。和平使者(你)的“words, smile, heart”可以化敌为友。

移花接木

2024-02-06 12:33:14

Lives perished in fire& ice, when fire runs into ice,

移花接木

2024-02-06 12:33:32

Lives are born in water

CBA7

2024-02-06 20:33:58

That's true in the nature. Fire and ice in my poem

CBA7

2024-02-06 21:09:09

are symbols for enemies.

妖妖灵

2024-02-06 14:15:05

Fire and ice,love each other,and kill each other

CBA7

2024-02-06 20:36:32

That happens all the time.

甜虫虫

2024-02-06 15:46:42

In xiaoxi’s world, even fire and ice can live in harmony :)

CBA7

2024-02-06 20:40:05

哈哈哈,谢谢虫虫的美言。Always be positive :)

godog

2024-02-06 16:53:13

When fire runs into ice, ice freezes fire's ire:)

CBA7

2024-02-06 21:13:41

Hahaha, great point! That's how they become friends! Go兄高见!

蓝灵

2024-02-06 19:13:17

Hello again, 小西! When it comes to ice and fire, some may

蓝灵

2024-02-06 19:16:49

stand for polarization and some may settle on harmonization.

蓝灵

2024-02-06 19:18:44

Thank you for posting a philosophical poem.

renqiulan

2024-02-06 21:07:50

+1

CBA7

2024-02-06 21:20:21

Thank you for your encouraging words.

CBA7

2024-02-06 21:18:11

Yes, it depends.

方外居士

2024-02-06 19:24:27

冰火相济!

CBA7

2024-02-06 21:22:20

谢谢居士雅临点评鼓励。

颤音

2024-02-06 19:46:18

who wins, fire? Or ice? Or neither? like your version

CBA7

2024-02-06 21:24:55

Hahaha, they're not fighting any more.

CBA7

2024-02-06 21:26:24

和平使者(你)的“words, smile, heart” 让 fire 和 ice 化敌为友。

暖冬cool夏

2024-02-06 20:23:59

好寓意,冰火相容!

CBA7

2024-02-06 21:30:32

You got it! 谢谢冬夏。Just like 暖冬和cool夏相容 :)

renqiulan

2024-02-06 21:06:39

Let me choose the golden mean between ice and fire or

renqiulan

2024-02-06 21:07:14

yin and yang, for that matter.

CBA7

2024-02-06 21:31:52

Great thought! 谢谢秋兰分享。