Red-eye Flight ( A Poem Reading Tuesday Production:))

Red-eye Flight

 

You look at the night

through your dark eyes

that search for light.

 

You look at your flight

through your red eyes

that wanna shutter tight.

 

Drifting in your eyes are

the scarlet morning clouds

that are gonna burn

and become bright.

 

 

Notes:

This poem was inspired by the poem “I look at the world” by Langston Hughes and was written during lunch break on Feb. 20, 2024.

 

 

 

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• Go兄真是妙思联想，神来之笔，好诗！谢谢分享。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 12:08:38

• 都是因为小西组织的活动带来的灵感，非常感谢！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 12:18:36

• 谢谢Go兄对活动的支持和鼓励。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 12:24:20

• 哈哈,in this way,to write an E poem is much easier than 7绝:） -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 12:24:43

• I wish it was easy to write E poems:) -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:24:43

• 第一句化自顾城的名句么？：） -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 17:31:02

• 半句吧，"that search for light" -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:25:29

• 赞！ Go兄才思敏捷 -天边一片白云- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 17:40:40

• 谢谢天兄！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:26:05

• humorous -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 18:47:43

• You have a different perspective -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:26:59

• Brief but meaningful! From dark to bright, we are searchin好诗 -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 01:28:38

• 谢谢暖冬鼓励！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:27:42