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Red-eye Flight ( A Poem Reading Tuesday Production:))

godog 2024-02-20 11:57:45 ( reads)

Red-eye Flight

 

You look at the night

through your dark eyes

that search for light.

 

You look at your flight

through your red eyes

that wanna shutter tight.

 

Drifting in your eyes are

the scarlet morning clouds

that are gonna burn

and become bright.

 

 

Notes:

This poem was inspired by the poem “I look at the world” by Langston Hughes and was written during lunch break on Feb. 20, 2024.

 

 

 

 

 

跟帖(13)

CBA7

2024-02-20 12:08:38

Go兄真是妙思联想,神来之笔,好诗!谢谢分享。

godog

2024-02-20 12:18:36

都是因为小西组织的活动带来的灵感,非常感谢!

CBA7

2024-02-20 12:24:20

谢谢Go兄对活动的支持和鼓励。

妖妖灵

2024-02-20 12:24:43

哈哈,in this way,to write an E poem is much easier than 7绝:)

godog

2024-02-21 20:24:43

I wish it was easy to write E poems:)

盈盈一笑间

2024-02-20 17:31:02

第一句化自顾城的名句么?:)

godog

2024-02-21 20:25:29

半句吧,"that search for light"

天边一片白云

2024-02-20 17:40:40

赞! Go兄才思敏捷

godog

2024-02-21 20:26:05

谢谢天兄!

颤音

2024-02-20 18:47:43

humorous

godog

2024-02-21 20:26:59

You have a different perspective

暖冬cool夏

2024-02-21 01:28:38

Brief but meaningful! From dark to bright, we are searchin好诗

godog

2024-02-21 20:27:42

谢谢暖冬鼓励!