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Haiku Exercises

godog 2024-02-27 12:25:29 ( reads)

The following are three haiku exercises after reading the haiku in today's Poem Reading Tuesday post. I have never written one before, so this was a first try. I didn't try to follow the 5-7-5 rule which is not that easy in English.

 

Desert

 

A world of sand,

and within every grain,

a world so grand.

 

Wild Flower

 

A world of wild flower,

and within every petal,

a world of singular beauty.

 

Snowflake

 

Your are so otherworldly.

With a speck of dust in your heart,

you're also very down to earth.

跟帖(6)

CBA7

2024-02-27 12:46:48

Go兄真是才思敏捷,信手拈来就是神来之笔,大赞,谢谢分享!

godog

2024-02-27 19:31:16

发现午餐时琢磨几句诗也可以让大脑从工作中休息一下:)

妖妖灵

2024-02-27 15:42:41

前两段真喜欢,接了一个龙,跟在上面了:)

盈盈一笑间

2024-02-27 17:39:10

日本绯句,在中国有汉绯,英文原来也有演变体呀。汉绯要押韵,能读出诗的感觉。这英文版的,和把一句话分成三段排列有什么区别吗

godog

2024-02-27 19:34:23

我也不太了解,只是现学现卖,跟着几个小西链接里的例子学的,有些就是一句话分行

暖冬cool夏

2024-02-27 22:42:41

太喜欢前面两首了,and within each grian, aworld so grand! 意思押韵都非常好!赞!