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Snowflake ( eat Peking duck in three different ways)

godog 2024-03-03 15:27:03 ( reads)

Actually this post isn't about how to eat a duck in three different ways ( 一鸭三吃), rather it's about how to write a poem in three different ways. I apologize if I misled you. If you're not interested in the poems you can jump directly to the end of the post where a link to the recipes of eating a duck in three different ways is provided.

 

The short English poem below was an haiku exercise I did on the past Tuesday. I like it a lot, so I wrote two Chinese poems with similar meaning that is like a duck whose every gram was consumed by me now by eating what's remaining cooked in a different recipe after each round, three rounds in a row.

 

Snowflake

 

You are so otherworldly.

With a speck of dust in your heart,

You are also very down to earth.

 

【七绝】雪花

 

玲珑六角具觭骸,脱俗超凡天外来。

飘落人间接地气,只因心里纳尘埃。

 

注:

(1) 觭,Jī,古通“奇”,单一,唯一的意思。

(2) 雪花的形成开始于高空中的水蒸气凝聚在空气中飘浮的尘埃上。

 

雪花

 

你有六角玲珑

独一无二的形骸

 

你开始于一粒

升自大地的尘埃

 

你在天外完成蜕变

又飘飘然然归来

 

你是超凡脱俗的精灵

又有最接地气的胸怀

 

生于尘埃归于尘埃

你的一生短暂精彩

 

(© March 3, 2024, godog)

 

Finally the link to the recipes of eating a duck in three different ways:

https://m.dealmoon.com/guide/948684

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

跟帖(13)

盈盈一笑间

2024-03-03 18:27:04

You are so otherworldly,and also very down to earth.

盈盈一笑间

2024-03-03 18:28:46

A unique perspective on snowflakes

盈盈一笑间

2024-03-03 18:42:30

烤鸭三吃。我们这里的北京烤鸭,前些年是$99一只。现在便宜了一些。

godog

2024-03-04 21:31:02

十年前休斯顿的北京烤鸭二吃(片皮、鸭架子汤)是$28

妖妖灵

2024-03-03 19:05:30

古今中外大串联啊!再唱出来,再画出来,就是五吃了:)

godog

2024-03-04 21:32:35

再跳出来,凑成六吃吧,吉利:))

移花接木

2024-03-04 04:24:54

just learned Y air felt so fresh when snowing! love snow

移花接木

2024-03-04 04:28:11

4ever->natural air purifier

godog

2024-03-04 21:33:32

You have half a year of that for free

天边一片白云

2024-03-04 13:20:14

今冬有幸欣赏了G兄好几首有关雪的诗。G兄那里也下雪吗?三种方法吃完你做北京烤鸭有没有给你灵感写一手诗?

天边一片白云

2024-03-04 13:30:29

那个链接内容挺丰富的,不仅有怎么吃鸭,还有怎么做春皮。学习了,下次试一试。

godog

2024-03-04 21:37:18

我这里下得不多,平均每年六英寸,不过比得州多了无穷倍。光忙着做烤鸭,没空找灵感了

CBA7

2024-03-05 09:35:39

“飘落人间接地气,只因心里纳尘埃” “生于尘埃归于尘埃 你的一生短暂精彩” 两首中文诗和上周的英文诗一样精彩!