You did a great job on the translation. It's smooth and
godog
2024-04-27 06:56:23
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quite accurate. Some word choices could be improved, such as 'term' to 'time'. There should be a 'to' between 'going' and 'violate' that you probably missed unintensionally. The original has been added in the main post for your reference.
妖妖灵
2024-04-27 14:02:41谢谢更正!学习了!每次写作业,真是痛苦并快乐着—--翻译题好难:)