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【周日游吟】雁鸣九州 (双语)

renqiulan 2024-08-18 19:40:42 ( reads)

《青玉案》定格*
词林正韵第四部上声

 

 

神州南北同乡土,
跨五岳,横三楚。
出入风尘仙侠侣,
有声相应,有情相顾,
阵上终生许。

敢轻天下唯飞羽,
人字行行贯千古。
见尽诸王骄挽弩,
射民民反,射天天怒,
射雁君何苦?


*据龙榆生词谱:

中平中仄平平仄,(韵)
仄中仄、平平仄。(韵)
仄仄平平平仄仄。(韵)
中平平仄,中平中仄,
中仄平平仄。(韵)

中平中仄平平仄,(韵)
中仄平平仄平仄。(韵)
仄仄平平平仄仄。(韵)
中平平仄,中平中仄,
中仄平平仄。(韵)

 

 

 

A Wild Goose Chase

Once enthroned, the Emperor  convinced himself that he was destined to lead the world. However, he soon proved to be a bumbling actor on the global stage.

A self-proclaimed warrior, the Emperor's frequent attempts at unconventional warfare were baffling. In one critical battle, he rode into the fray atop a horse facing backward. His bewildered yet loyal soldiers followed suit, resulting in a chaotic retreat. Claiming victory nonetheless, he boasted of testing a new strategy inspired by Sun Tzu, who, naturally, couldn't contradict him from the grave.

As the sole imperial economist, the Emperor never shied away from bold ideas to break world records, whatever that meant. For instance, he once decreed that all chickens should be dressed in red to increase egg production, leading to an empire-wide shortage of red dye, garments, and eggs.

Still, life went on—or so we were told.


作者:纫秋兰

 

 

 

 

跟帖(87)

zhiyanle

2024-08-18 19:59:05

好词。寓意颇深。。。。。。。

renqiulan

2024-08-18 20:09:25

感谢zhiyanle鼓励!自问还是学子一名。

老林子里的夏天

2024-08-18 20:04:10

好!既有古典诗词的典雅,又充满了对现实的深刻思考

老林子里的夏天

2024-08-18 20:05:22

I love this story because it reminds me that in this land of

老林子里的夏天

2024-08-18 20:06:27

North America, everyone—friends, competitors, and ordinary

renqiulan

2024-08-18 20:25:04

It's encouraging how the story resonates with you

renqiulan

2024-08-18 20:25:52

on that level. It certainly provokes thought about the role

renqiulan

2024-08-18 20:28:34

of power. Power unchecked is power abused. A naked emperor

renqiulan

2024-08-18 20:30:21

is a laughingstock, needless to say. Thanks for your input!

老林子里的夏天

2024-08-18 20:41:56

Absolutely, the image of the 'naked emperor' perfectly

renqiulan

2024-08-18 20:13:11

林子对晚辈如我不吝赠言,实在庆幸。从华夏固有文化,我开始认识中国。

AP33912

2024-08-18 20:07:00

三楚任your heros飞扬, 3 kingdoms legends 九州传。

renqiulan

2024-08-18 20:44:35

Three Kingdoms, legends old. Heroes rise, stories unfold.

renqiulan

2024-08-18 20:49:48

AP has a style, which is a cultural blending. Your poem

renqiulan

2024-08-18 20:50:37

evokes a sense of heroism, legends, and the vastness of

renqiulan

2024-08-18 20:51:58

Chinese history. It blends ancient Chinese concepts

renqiulan

2024-08-18 20:53:01

with a modern touch (using English words). Thanks!

AP33912

2024-08-18 20:58:00

哈哈,i do these only to 鼓励你多些双语诗(文):)

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:01:32

Keep it coming, AP! I'll respond in English. Thanks again.

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:03:22

秋兰周日晚上好!

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:04:30

蓝灵好!

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:22:24

“雁鸣九州” ,意在…

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:24:56

回响。

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:26:47

“出入风尘仙侠侣”呢?

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:28:16

象征着漂泊的志士。

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:30:08

“阵上终生许”呢?

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:32:07

侠群必须合群,相许终生。这,投射到雁阵上去了。

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:34:07

“见尽诸王骄挽弩,射民民反,射天天怒”有着强烈的批判色彩。

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:36:11

批判?不如说是写照吧。

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:38:25

“射雁君何苦?”呢?

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:41:06

为君者,与其射雁,不如 “亲射虎,看孙郎。…会挽雕弓如滿月,西北望,射天狼。‘’ (苏轼《江城子》)

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:43:09

“影射”某君?

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:44:15

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:45:31

好详细的回答。

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:46:36

谢谢!

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:48:10

"A Wild Goose Chase," strikes me as a satirical take on

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:48:54

leadership gone awry. What inspired you to write this

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:49:21

particular narrative?

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:51:06

The inspiration came from observing how certain leaders,

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:51:43

blinded by their own ego and perceived invincibility,

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:52:15

make irrational decisions that ripple across society.

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:54:19

The scene where the Emperor rides into battle facing

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:55:06

backward is particularly memorable. What was your

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:55:40

intention behind this imagery?

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:57:16

That scene embodies the folly of a leader who is utterly

renqiulan

2024-08-18 21:57:59

out of touch with reality yet insists on leading the charge.

蓝灵

2024-08-18 21:59:27

Absurdity rules.

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:00:40

Indeed it does.

蓝灵

2024-08-18 22:02:22

Absurdity has tragic consequences, I guess.

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:03:43

The tragedy lies in the fact that despite the clear failure,

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:04:21

the Emperor still claims victory, showing his delusion and

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:04:47

the dangerous nature of his self-deception.

蓝灵

2024-08-18 22:05:57

Ah Q?

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:06:49

You can say that again.

蓝灵

2024-08-18 22:08:05

The part about dressing chickens in red to boost egg

蓝灵

2024-08-18 22:08:57

production is laughable.

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:10:16

That’s another example of the Emperor's ludicrous policies.

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:11:19

His audacity kept testing the limits of his authority.

蓝灵

2024-08-18 22:13:10

It seems to mock the idea of superficial solutions to

蓝灵

2024-08-18 22:14:13

complex problems.

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:16:00

It actually mocks unchecked power, comparing it to

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:16:29

a runaway train.

蓝灵

2024-08-18 22:18:14

Hopefully it is an empty train.

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:19:15

What if it is not?

蓝灵

2024-08-18 22:20:16

Oh no!

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:21:13

Don't worry too much about it. Have sweet dreams.

蓝灵

2024-08-18 22:22:34

Cool. Good night!

renqiulan

2024-08-18 22:23:22

Goodnight!

云霞姐姐

2024-08-18 22:47:47

好有气势的诗,仄尾,对得真好.图片惊艳,好像是电脑合成吧,选得好!

renqiulan

2024-08-19 18:27:25

感谢云儿鼓励,我还在习作价段。那个飞雁图,也是习作。想尽量少用,甚至不用网图。

然后呢

2024-08-19 03:40:14

射箭这事儿我陪娃干过,从足球场的宽边的一头射到另一头,距离50多米,这要是往天上射,还能打到正在飞行的加拿大雁的话,绝非

renqiulan

2024-08-19 18:33:58

感谢然后呢点评!射艺,想必是艺中之艺;让子女学习,可见父母的睿智。大雁嘛,恐怕还受保护。

小花荣

2024-08-19 05:59:20

很有意境,美。

renqiulan

2024-08-19 18:36:30

感谢小花荣!

laopika

2024-08-19 09:35:17

喜欢最后两句,有意义:)

renqiulan

2024-08-19 18:37:24

感谢laopika!

renqiulan

2024-08-19 18:42:16

感谢杜鹃鼓励!

renqiulan

2024-08-19 18:43:34

感谢lovecat08鼓励!

天边一片白云

2024-08-19 18:46:32

哈哈,你写得即犀利又幽默。

天边一片白云

2024-08-19 18:48:10

“he boasted of testing a new strategy inspired by Sun Tzu,

天边一片白云

2024-08-19 18:49:57

, who, naturally, couldn't contradict him from the grave”

天边一片白云

2024-08-19 18:50:58

and the chickens dressed in red

renqiulan

2024-08-20 16:56:42

“Absurdity rules,” which it shouldn't.

renqiulan

2024-08-20 16:55:19

感谢白云鼓励!

ToClouds

2024-08-20 19:02:15

秋兰中英文造诣深,拜读了

renqiulan

2024-08-20 21:14:03

感谢云起!“果浆”了。

renqiulan

2024-08-20 21:15:01

感谢幸福生鼓励!