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【周日游吟】不酒罚作(双语)

renqiulan 2024-08-25 19:43:02 ( reads)

(平水韵七律)

江南第一醉香楼,
客啖黃花片片秋。
天下寒霜归鬓角,
尘间清月出心头。
无诗不犯当朝怒,
有酒何消古国愁?
梦送渊明歌易水,*
入秦轻驾武陵舟。


*陶潜有诗咏荆轲

 

金陵/南京

 

Was Jinling a Dream?

Late into the night, I couldn't tear my eyes away from the laptop screen. The pavilion in my digital creation seemed to throb with life, its image growing larger, blocking the concrete high-rises.

Out of curiosity, I reached out to touch the screen, my fingers passing through the glass. A cool, smooth sensation lingered, as if I had touched the surface of a still pond. Before I could react, the image enveloped me, and I found myself standing on the pavilion's steps, the night air caressing my skin.

Modern Nanjing had vanished, replaced by a landscape of serene gardens and moonlit waters. I heard distant murmurs and the gentle tinkling of chimes.

 

 

An elderly gentleman in a silk robe approached. His presence was dignified and commanding, as if he were the very essence of this ancient world. "I am the Spirit of Jinling," he said. "You, ren-qiu-lan, have bridged the past and present. Your image was no mere art. It was a portal, uniting two worlds that are not so different."

The Spirit of Jinling smiled and invited me to join him. "Wine will flow, though I suspect you might prefer tea." I nodded gratefully. He then informed me that, as a nondrinker, I would need to submit a classical poem as my passport back to my world. Not a bad trade-off, considering the circumstances.


图/文:纫秋兰

 

 

 

 

跟帖(70)

蓝灵

2024-08-25 20:06:13

写古典格律诗最要是什么呢?

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:08:32

我沒有资格回答。只能说,多读多揣摩。

蓝灵

2024-08-25 20:11:09

秋兰谦成了这个样子,怎样交流下去呢?

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:14:10

还在介乎“推门”与“敲门”之间,所以不好说,否则就容易胡说。

蓝灵

2024-08-25 20:16:44

尾联“梦送渊明歌易水,入秦轻驾武陵舟”,这是个什么梦?

云霞姐姐

2024-08-25 20:18:21

哇,坐前排,读好诗

蓝灵

2024-08-25 20:28:21

问好云儿!

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:38:16

云儿周日晚上好!感谢鼓励。

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:19:18

辛弃疾万分佩服陶渊明,说他“风流酷似、卧龙诸葛”,颇有‘’伏枥‘’的弦外之音。

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:20:24

事实上,渊明的《咏荆轲》,确是道出‘’士为知己者死‘’、豪气干云,舍身不屈的一代传奇人物。

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:21:16

所以我想,“归去来兮”的隐士,心底很可能与“视死如归”的壮士气息相通的。

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:22:12

因此,借个梦,引只武陵舟,让他入秦而非避秦,闯咸京而非进桃源。

蓝灵

2024-08-25 20:24:38

知你意犹未尽,请继续发挥,说说诗。

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:27:03

诗嘛,只要合乎內在逻辑,何妨尽情扩大想象空间?

蓝灵

2024-08-25 20:33:36

善哉!小妹谢谢醍醐灌顶。

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:36:08

姑娘言重,真不敢当。

老林子里的夏天

2024-08-25 20:35:24

妙啊!

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:39:22

再谢。

老梅林

2024-08-26 19:33:27

坦然面对艰苦贫乏的生活,比死亡更难。

renqiulan

2024-08-27 15:51:21

感谢老梅林留评。如果“艰苦贫乏”指的是陶潜,恕我不敢苟同。

老梅林

2024-08-27 19:45:08

谢秋兰回复!陶潜有以前的五斗米垫底,又有自家园地,当然不贫困。我是说贫民草芥的生活态度比隐士们坦然得多。

老林子里的夏天

2024-08-25 20:22:25

如期而至,精彩无比。‘入秦轻驾武陵舟’句绝妙,以历史典故轻描于笔下,意境如游崇山峻岭般悠远广阔,轻驾其上,

老林子里的夏天

2024-08-25 20:22:42

正是‘武陵舟上的桃花源’。

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:40:25

林子这话可圈可点。

蓝灵

2024-08-25 20:31:07

....

云霞姐姐

2024-08-25 20:31:09

有典故的诗,借景抒情,忧国忧民,感觉到了

云霞姐姐

2024-08-25 20:35:03

哎呀妈呀,俺也悟到啦“平水韵七律”指:每行七个字,平平水平,韵?

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:48:49

云儿登堂了。还记得《红楼梦》里有不少论诗斗诘的描写。对呀,用平水韵,平上去入四声分明。不过,普通话欠了入声,不好弄。

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:44:43

云儿知我意。秋兰虽非华裔,然而深慕古国人文主义文化,恐其衰微。

云霞姐姐

2024-08-25 20:48:48

小R你最棒,这诗,都很精采,将来出个诗集,我们星坛坛友都是第一读者,偷偷骄傲一下,嘻嘻

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:57:53

揖谢,同志仍须努力。

AP33912

2024-08-25 20:45:00

莫愁lakeside秋兰sits,roundtrips to 唐宋 cost 首诗。

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:56:09

莫愁湖畔莫愁兰,一夜秋寒笑不寒。

renqiulan

2024-08-25 20:58:48

感谢阿普一路支持!

蓝灵

2024-08-25 21:08:27

The idea of a digital image acting as a portal is quite

蓝灵

2024-08-25 21:09:23

captivating.

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:10:58

I wanted to explore the intersection of modernity and

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:12:14

and tradition, especially in a place like Nanjing.

蓝灵

2024-08-25 21:14:13

The Spirit of Jinling mentions that the two worlds "are not

蓝灵

2024-08-25 21:15:22

so different after all." Can you elaborate on this theme?

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:17:15

The essence of human experience remains consistent

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:17:37

across time.

蓝灵

2024-08-25 21:19:11

Does that make sense of your ID?

laopika

2024-08-25 21:20:02

那张金陵照,可是秦淮河边夫子庙?:)

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:45:45

感谢提问。在数码构图时没有刻意采入南京名胜景点如夫子庙等。

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:21:08

Absolutely. My ID "renqiulan" is a nod to classical Chinese

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:22:25

literature. It refers to autumn orchids, symbolizing

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:22:54

elegance past and present. Am I living up to it? I hope so.

蓝灵

2024-08-25 21:24:25

Why was the pavilion scene so vivid?

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:26:22

I wanted readers to feel my awe.

蓝灵

2024-08-25 21:28:12

Why did you choose poetry as the medium for your challenge?

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:30:04

In this story, poetry serves as both a challenge and a

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:30:51

connection, tying me to the classical world I’ve entered.

蓝灵

2024-08-25 21:33:51

The condition to write a classical poem as a way back to

蓝灵

2024-08-25 21:34:34

modern times is intriguing.

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:36:08

It’s a transformative experience.

蓝灵

2024-08-25 21:38:11

How did you blend the past and present without overwhelming

蓝灵

2024-08-25 21:38:43

the narrative?

renqiulan

2024-08-25 21:40:12

The key was to let my experience guide the narrative.

杜鹃盛开

2024-08-26 03:43:32

如期读到秋兰好诗,跟着你们慢慢学习古诗之韵 ,谢谢分享:)

renqiulan

2024-08-26 14:13:48

杜鹃太谦了,祝新周愉快!

小花荣

2024-08-26 06:02:38

秋兰行的,下笔有神。

renqiulan

2024-08-26 14:16:01

小花荣太“果浆”了,问好!

lovecat08

2024-08-26 16:26:32

豪!壮!悲!叹!

renqiulan

2024-08-26 19:46:50

感谢爱猫留评鼓励。

renqiulan

2024-08-26 19:48:40

感谢耳机点赞!

renqiulan

2024-08-26 19:58:27

感谢老梅林点赞!

renqiulan

2024-08-26 20:00:59

感谢心雨烟尘点赞!

renqiulan

2024-08-26 20:04:17

感谢远风点赞!

renqiulan

2024-08-27 15:41:54

感谢攸墨尔点赞!