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【周日游吟】还我布衣(双语)

renqiulan 2024-09-01 19:50:54 ( reads)

平水韵七律(微韵)

 

踏过朱袍仰笑归,
布衣暮采首阳薇。
崖前双瀑甘齐堕,
岭上孤虹敢一飞。
枕月白头千古梦,
卧云清影九霄辉。
长安不见何须见?
胸有棋兵夺帝畿。*


*杜甫《秋兴八首》:
“闻道长安似弈棋”


Loyalty versus Talent

There was one question plaguing the emperor's mind: was loyalty more valuable than talent? He pondered this deeply, often losing sleep over the matter.

 

 

"Your Majesty," a courtier said one day, "why not test both virtues with a simple riddle?"


Intrigued, the emperor agreed.

"Imagine," the courtier continued, "there are two men—one incredibly loyal, the other incredibly talented. Which one would you prefer to have as your advisor?"

The emperor thought for a moment. "The incredibly loyal one, of course," he replied. "He would always put my empire's needs before his own. Loyalty!"

"And what if that loyal advisor were to make unsound decisions?" the courtier asked.

The emperor hesitated. "A talented advisor would guide my empire to prosperity. Talent!"

The courtier smiled. "But what if that talented advisor were to betray Your Majesty for personal gain?"

The emperor's brow furrowed. "Loyalty!" he said firmly.

"And what if that loyal advisor were to make a mistake that led to, God forbid, the empire's downfall?" the courtier pressed.

The emperor groaned. "Talent!" he replied.

"And what if that talented advisor were to become arrogant and believe he was above Your Majesty's law?"

The emperor sighed. "Loyalty," he said, his voice barely a whisper.

In the end, the word "LOYALTY" echoed like thunder across the empire.


图/文:纫秋兰


来日再见。
Summer's over—catch you later!

 

 

 

 

跟帖(71)

蓝灵

2024-09-01 20:45:53

脚踏朱袍,身穿布衣,好汉子。秋兰周日晚上好!

renqiulan

2024-09-01 20:51:08

蓝灵周日晚上好!

蓝灵

2024-09-01 20:56:30

“布衣暮采首阳薇”这一句里的“衣”和“薇”同属微韵。有人在网上谈律诗的时候说同句同韵是不宜的。

renqiulan

2024-09-01 21:00:55

念念李商隐的《锦瑟》。

蓝灵

2024-09-01 21:07:44

“一弦一柱思华年”,‘’弦‘’与‘’年‘’分明同属先韵。

renqiulan

2024-09-01 21:22:19

对。还有呢?

蓝灵

2024-09-01 21:29:04

“蓝田日暖玉生烟”,‘’田‘’与‘’烟‘’同韵。

renqiulan

2024-09-01 21:46:36

对。

蓝灵

2024-09-01 21:49:41

网传《锦瑟》是当今最受欢迎的唐人律作。

renqiulan

2024-09-01 21:51:09

对。

蓝灵

2024-09-01 21:53:36

‘’奇文共欣赏,疑义相与析‘’。(陶渊明)

renqiulan

2024-09-01 21:55:26

姑娘厉害!

唐宋韵

2024-09-01 21:00:58

七言律绝首句入韵者为多;五言律绝首句不入韵者为多。。。秋兰你认为呢?

renqiulan

2024-09-01 21:10:52

七言律绝爱入韵,五言律绝爱自由。莫道诗家有定规,韵脚随心自在游。这四句不算是诗,作七言胡吟看待好了。

唐宋韵

2024-09-01 21:16:47

瞧瞧,这个七言,首句就不入韵。。。 诗家爱自由,好!

renqiulan

2024-09-01 21:19:52

莫道诗家有定规,韵脚随心自在游。

唐宋韵

2024-09-01 20:57:28

秋兰好诗。尾联应该不是暗示杜甫的心思吧?他不会的。

renqiulan

2024-09-01 21:05:41

是来源, 诗不是暗示杜甫的心思, 他不会的。

renqiulan

2024-09-01 22:07:57

世事如棋局,政事更如是。政海翻波,宦海浮沉,少陵野老懂得的。感谢唐宋韵不吝交流。

老林子里的夏天

2024-09-02 10:29:31

看着你们的对话留言,实乃是享受。今天天气真好!

renqiulan

2024-09-02 14:26:05

喜闻林子驻足。

云霞姐姐

2024-09-01 21:08:04

坐前排,慢慢欣赏小R的大贴,两张照片都相当震撼!

renqiulan

2024-09-01 21:18:57

小R + AI = 图像

云霞姐姐

2024-09-01 21:26:48

真是好诗,每个韵都这么好听,而用词特别美,文字功底深厚!最后一个字不认识,去查

云霞姐姐

2024-09-01 21:28:27

请问小R,这(微韵)与平时的平水韵有什么区别吗?

云霞姐姐

2024-09-01 21:34:41

“畿”读ji(基),欧耶!又学会一个字

renqiulan

2024-09-01 21:41:34

京織,又曰帝王州。

renqiulan

2024-09-01 21:40:13

感谢云儿不断鼓励!特别指出是平水韵的微韵,无非因为此韵概含微啦衣啦等不像互押的字,正如灰韵一样。临別赠帖,来日再见。

蓝灵

2024-09-01 22:12:04

I have a question about grammar: why did you use "he were"

蓝灵

2024-09-01 22:12:51

instead of "he was"?

renqiulan

2024-09-01 22:17:49

Even though "he" would normally take "was" in the indicative

renqiulan

2024-09-01 22:18:35

mood ("he was"), in the subjunctive mood, "were" is used

renqiulan

2024-09-01 22:19:16

instead to indicate that the situation is not real or

renqiulan

2024-09-01 22:19:43

is contrary to reality.

蓝灵

2024-09-01 22:23:03

In the emperor's mind, there must be a delicate dance

蓝灵

2024-09-01 22:23:57

between loyalty and talent.

renqiulan

2024-09-01 22:26:19

Quite a torturous dance, truth be told.

蓝灵

2024-09-01 22:29:37

No wonder the emperor just kept flip-flopping.

renqiulan

2024-09-01 22:32:27

Yes, he was searching for a unicorn—loyalty with a touch of

renqiulan

2024-09-01 22:33:12

brilliance.

蓝灵

2024-09-01 22:46:54

The emperor was stuck in an endless loop.Any advice for him?

renqiulan

2024-09-01 22:49:13

He might want to hire both candidates and let them argue it

renqiulan

2024-09-01 22:49:35

out.

蓝灵

2024-09-01 22:57:26

I doubt it would work.

renqiulan

2024-09-01 23:00:06

Why?

蓝灵

2024-09-01 23:02:22

Everyone would bet on loyalty because the emperor wouldn't

蓝灵

2024-09-01 23:03:30

live with anything but loyalty.

renqiulan

2024-09-01 23:05:25

That was certainly the case.

蓝灵

2024-09-01 23:10:18

That being said, shouldn't the emperor just flip a coin in

蓝灵

2024-09-01 23:10:43

public?

renqiulan

2024-09-01 23:17:22

He could, but the coin might betray him too!

蓝灵

2024-09-01 23:23:44

Hahaha! Did the emperor ever find peace with his decision?

renqiulan

2024-09-01 23:29:39

Only when he realized that the real answer was having a good

renqiulan

2024-09-01 23:30:17

night’s sleep.

蓝灵

2024-09-01 23:33:14

I'm afraid he wouldn't sleep well anyway.

renqiulan

2024-09-01 23:36:14

He would probably end up being consumed by paranoia.

renqiulan

2024-09-01 23:37:40

On that note, let me say goodnight to you.

蓝灵

2024-09-01 23:39:08

Good night!

杜鹃盛开

2024-09-02 07:22:58

照片很漂亮,欣赏秋兰诗作;)

renqiulan

2024-09-02 14:27:11

感谢杜鹃鼓励,来日再见。

laopika

2024-09-02 07:54:42

好诗!风景是照片还是画?真美!

renqiulan

2024-09-02 14:29:43

文中两个圖像均是我的数码涂鸦。感谢鼓励!

老林子里的夏天

2024-09-02 07:54:54

“踏过朱袍仰笑归,布衣暮采首阳薇。”好句!秋兰风华正茂,怎就动了隐居之念?:)倒不如潇洒走一回,做个当代名医,济世救人

renqiulan

2024-09-02 14:35:18

感谢林子摯言,来日再见。

ToClouds

2024-09-02 10:22:29

好诗!好画!秋兰对中文掌握比我好多了

renqiulan

2024-09-02 14:40:30

感谢云起,配图是自制的数码涂鸦。自问还是个汉语学生,有鼓励,愿更有进步。

AP33912

2024-09-02 14:12:00

再读 still 2thumps up!

renqiulan

2024-09-02 14:41:55

太感谢AP了,来日再见。

天边一片白云

2024-09-02 17:48:58

Haha, it is not easy to find right people.

renqiulan

2024-09-02 18:37:05

It's like trying to find a needle in a haystack, but the

renqiulan

2024-09-02 18:39:02

needle is moving and the haystack is on fire. Thank you!