my version: when Teacher Gu woke up and found his
sportwoman
2012-08-29 06:58:55
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wife sobbing quietly into her blanket
--when Teacher Gu woke up finding his wife sobbing quietly into her blanket.
midnightblue
2012-08-29 11:57:16好！能用分词短语就不用从句。吴曼改得好！ BTW，我不是表扬专业的。