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Well, my all-time favorite book is Ever After written by Nancy Woods, an English writer. 

And there are many reasons why I like it. 

The most important reason is that this book tells you(YOU最好用ME,US, 和其它代词一致; 或干脆去掉)an exciting adventure story, where people travel to far away places and meet very different cultures. I was taken into another world and forgot about the pressure and stress in real life whenever I read it(最好用一般时态. 如果特指过去某一时间点,最好加上表示过去的副词.) 

What's more, it brought(最好用一般时态或完成时) me many topics to talk with my friends. I can chat with my friends on and on about the book and its characters; and any topic, clever or silly, related to the book can always become a point of lengthy discussions. Staying with friends makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

That's why I like this book.

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Talking about my favorite place, undoubtedly, it’s my hometown, Qingdao.

I can’t help loving the city because of its beauty and the special cultural atmosphere.

My hometown is famous for its charming ocean view. I mean the sky there is so blue and the beach is always full of sunshine. You know how romantic it can ever be, just relax yourself(整个段落代词最好统一,原因与上同) on the beach, when the sun is setting down, when the ocean breeze is blowing and the seabirds are singing.

Another thing about Qingdao which makes it such an attracting city is about the architecture of the European style there. Walking in the famous Central Street in the middle of this city makes you wonder whether you are in China or in Germany(代词统一,同上).

Of course I like Qingdao also because there are many great restaurants. They offer the best seafood in the world like lobsters and tuna fishes(FISH的复数是FISH, FISHES一般用于表示不同种类鱼).

The most important, the memories and joy I experienced when I was there will always have a special place in my heart.

It’ll take me forever to talk about the reasons for loving the city. One thing is for sure, I will always love my hometown, the amazing city, Qingda.

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