好久不见，大家好-贴一个ESL老师给我改过的作业--写明信片。

Dear Mai,

Hello from i999 in Munich. It is my third visit to Munich and won’t be my last time.

When I stroll on the stone-paved roads built by the Romans and look at the historic buildings, the great history of Germany fills my mind. I felt very close to the great musicians, philosophers, writers, artists and architects in German history. I will go to the new swan castle which is the prototype of the castles in Disneyland tomorrow.

Keep in touch!

有了老师的好处是不愁砖了。