回复：if this is what the poet wanted to carry out in his poem

unlike HWYS, i am open mind, anything better is always acceptable. YS would not agree with you just for the fact that thers is no mentioning of "pit" in the original, say nothing of "my heart"

Do not be too cruel:) being heart-broken is too much, he was still make a living though it was a hard one, haha, just be kind to leave him some hopes.