第一句的不足
马下人
2014-10-03 09:28:31
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Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
以。。。。为信念。。。。在这个大陆上建立了一个崭新的国家(没有‘来此大陆’之说)
若退
2014-10-03 13:59:09意见甚是,当改为“于此大陆”。谢谢!