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试译希尼的《铁匠铺》

LinMu 2015-04-04 04:04:38 ( reads)

我所知道的是一道通向黑暗的门。

外面,生锈的旧轴和铁环;

里面,铁锤碰击锻砧发出的短高音,

无法预料的扇形火花

或新蹄鞋在水中变硬时的嘶嘶声。

锻砧该放在中央某处,

一端像独角兽的犄角,四方形,

固定不动:一座祭台

在那里,他在叮当声中挥臂锻造成型。

有时腰围皮革裙,鼻有茸毛,

他斜靠门框探着身子,在车流穿行的路上

回想马蹄的得得声;

然后咕哝着走进去,轻敲重击

鼓动风箱,打出真铁。


The Forge

by Seamus Heaney

 

All I know is a door into the dark.

Outside, old axles and iron hoops rusting;

Inside, the hammered anvil’s short-pitched ring,

The unpredictable fantail of sparks

Or hiss when a new shoe toughens in water.

The anvil must be somewhere in the centre,

Horned as a unicorn, at one end and square,

Set there immoveable: an altar

Where he expends himself in shape and music.

Sometimes, leather-aproned, hairs in his nose,

He leans out on the jamb, recalls a clatter

Of hoofs where traffic is flashing in rows;

Then grunts and goes in, with a slam and flick

To beat real iron out, to work the bellows.




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LinMu

2015-04-04 04:31:23

祝美坛的朋友们复活节快乐!请教高手with a slam and flick , to work the bellows.怎么译

LinMu

2015-04-05 14:51:15

多交流。

南山松

2015-04-04 04:50:25

谢谢分享好译,周末快乐!复活节快乐!

LinMu

2015-04-05 14:51:52

复活节快乐,请指正。

京燕花园

2015-04-04 19:55:50

what an exciting forge! Happy Easter LinMu.

LinMu

2015-04-05 14:41:03

燕子节日快乐!请问这里flick怎么解?

马下人

2015-04-07 07:21:05

我的理解

马下人

2015-04-07 12:55:37

with a slam and flick

京燕花园

2015-04-08 09:04:37

nice vivid explaination,thanks!^_^

LinMu

2015-04-07 18:44:55

谢谢,同意。