An interesting story, though there are some typos,
rancho2008
2016-02-09 22:42:39
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Re-assured, hard-working: No need to use a hyphen.
no sooner had I saw this cabin house at the moment then I changed my mind right away and forgot about that downtown house completely.
No sooner had I seen this cabin than I changed my mind and forgot about that downtown house completely
Today > that day?
Hanged > hung?
Coach > couch?
虔谦
2016-02-10 22:55:47下载了，感谢指正！