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这样改一下不知道可不可以:)

甜虫虫 2021-03-26 21:28:03 ( reads)

He wanted to go for a spring outing alone, taking a backpack, a camera, and some snackes and hiking in the wilderness all through the day, to look for the footprints of spring in the expanse of the countryside. 

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忒忒绿

2021-03-26 21:46:00

谢虫!更简洁明快了。是不是还是用to hike ... and to look for 来表达outing的目的

忒忒绿

2021-03-26 21:50:00

羊羊呢?

LYJiang

2021-03-27 07:06:24

I am sticking around, sir.

甜虫虫

2021-03-26 21:52:24

觉得主要行为是have an outing and look for the footsteps of Spring. 其他是辅

天边一片白云

2021-03-27 06:40:13

喜欢这种交流切磋的气氛。

忒忒绿

2021-03-27 08:52:00

;)又有娱乐、又有深入、又有浅出,相互学习,共同进步,很哇噻的气氛!

天边一片白云

2021-03-27 11:31:24

我现在回头再看你的译文,明白多了。