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交作业 先啃下第一部分

何仙姑 2021-11-05 13:36:27 ( reads)

I want to get to know you

Need a life forever 

No tomb   Lies in the mountains 

Exhausted   The long river

Even  Thunder tremors in winter 

Summer  Rain and snow 

 

Only   When heaven and earth 

Becomes one

But dare to farewell with you

 

5分钟改了10几遍了,不改了,就这样了加油

跟帖(6)

何仙姑

2021-11-05 13:39:44

还是觉得不太对头

何仙姑

2021-11-05 13:44:55

荡着秋千改啊改!

ibelieu

2021-11-05 13:59:04

有毕加索的味儿。:)

甜虫虫

2021-11-05 14:22:48

Thunders Tremor in winter, nice! :)

妖妖灵

2021-11-05 14:44:21

5分钟改了10几遍,真是仙姑速度:)

陶陶三

2021-11-05 15:07:58

一朵劫色的小红花~~~~