直译：入冬梅径直，拖雪雁行斜
天山晨
2021-11-12 17:31:41
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As soon as winter arrived, plum blossoms were in full bloom along the straight path, and because of the burden of snow, the geese flew diagonally in groups.
LYJiang
2021-11-12 19:25:15谢谢天山晨的直译，收珍！小江也是直译派的。拙句只是拙诗两句，天山采直译法，合情合理。