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暖冬cool夏 2023-12-01 10:05:47 ( reads)

In retrospect, my youth is like a morning storm, swirling by like the void and recurring broken pieces/fragments/scraps.

原来是 like this morning storm (想像作者是在一个大雪纷飞的一刻的感悟)

再改,把第一个like=seem,避免重复

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盈盈一笑间

2023-12-01 12:01:57

赞作业,学习~~

7grizzly

2023-12-01 12:24:36

I see you are getting cynical :-))

godog

2023-12-01 15:47:05

Great! The choices of the last word include the one by autho

暖冬cool夏

2023-12-01 19:42:50

Go兄好认真,一个个看过来评过来。多谢你的鼓励!等答案揭晓。周末快乐!