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翻得好。

dhyang_wxc 2023-12-01 11:38:37 ( reads)

在fleeting ……shards 与fleeting away in……shards, 我倾向于前者的意象。

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7grizzly

2023-12-01 12:17:21

Thanks. I agree. 'away' felt redundant.

godog

2023-12-01 15:24:24

'away' seems needed here to indicate they are gone