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请盈盈指正,谢谢!见里面:

CBA7 2023-12-01 13:25:30 ( reads)

当我回首往事时,我的青春岁月似乎像早晨的暴风雪一样,在一片苍白的、重复的碎片中飞逝而去。

When I look back, my youth was like a morning snowstorm, flying by in pale and repetitive fragments.

 

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暖冬cool夏

2023-12-01 15:37:43

这个in也是我原来想用的,用得好!简洁!

godog

2023-12-01 15:42:25

Great! Accurate, concise, and smooth!

盈盈一笑间

2023-12-01 18:17:29

流畅,读起来舒服,很顺。赞!

CBA7

2023-12-01 20:23:58

谢谢三位的鼓励。