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都不错。like the 1st 2 best.

戏雨飞鹰 2010-06-23 19:43:11 ( reads)

(read-through)

a clear creek
clinges
to the rolling valleys

simple shacks/humble huts
ornament
a green paddy field

(very nice. like it)

跟帖(9)

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:15:27

now, like all of them:):)

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:36:18

回复:now, like all of them:):)

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:51:36

有道理。:) 谢好译

bearsback

2010-06-23 22:06:20

直译

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 22:42:34

更直的。。

bearsback

2010-06-23 23:04:34

hahaha, I love it

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:39:35

宝贝

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:44:47

hahahaha... ok

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:25:25

回复:都不错。like the 1st 2 best.