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oh, i see. thanks.

戏雨飞鹰 2010-11-26 11:07:20 ( reads)

since "untold" can be used as adj, i thought the 3rd & 4th lines could be combined to 1 complete sentence as below:

a "untold"beautiful story/unfolds only in memory

:)

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falsetruth

2010-11-26 11:50:33

would be 'an untold':)

戏雨飞鹰

2010-11-26 12:02:45

haha, 对。不能怪我,我初中没毕业。