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立志从今以后都要用positive的眼神来看待事物，所以对8黑同学的诗有评如下：
8黑同学此诗较好地渲染出了冬日的萧杀凄凉之境却不失希冀，结尾句的峰回路转很有些四两拨千斤的味道。虽然winds出现的次数过多，而且他完全不知道自己写了些什么（就跟他平时“画”出了很多中文字却要叫别人告诉他那是些什么字一样），却是越读越有意思。特收之。
| Groundhog Day Acrostic Poem | | | | Ground filled with snow | | Resting in a burrow | | On heavy snow | | Under very cold fog | | No place to stay | | Done with spring | | High winds blowing | | On high strong winds | | Good snowball fight | | | | | Day the high winds blow | | At good night sleep | | Yep, it's spring, alright. |
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