相思
文章来源: ≠paleink2005-02-22 13:59:30
 

胡适

也想不相思, 可免相思苦;

几次细思量, 情愿相思苦。

  I too have wished not to love

     That I might escape love’s sorrow

         But now after much discretion

              I willingly admit love’s sorrow

                  

 

 

translated by paleink

 

 

      That I might escape love’s sorrow

                  But before being drown in discretion

                         I willingly admit the sorrow        

                                     Of Love

 

friend's revised version

 

 

I too have wished not to love

     That I might escape love’s sorrow

         But now after much discretion

              I willingly suffer for

                      whatever love will bring

                                     

                  

 

 

third version by paleink

 

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I too have wished not to love