Dust A stirring of dust Dancing in the wind Tells me in light we trust
Likes: Poettraveler, Daniel Roumell, O Amante, Jenny Middleton, Moss M. Jacques, Stuart Munro Poettraveler - An excellent poem - great depth of meaning in the description - well done indeed 19 days ago x Daniel Roumell - in light we trust until the twinkling blanket of the night sky wraps us in the comforting distortion of darkness, whispering soft lies about mourning. 3 months ago x Stuart Munro - Why do we have dust ? It’s not something we need , God The world would be a better place without it , I wouldn’t have asthma lol 3 months ago x Jenny Middleton - I like how visual your haiku is Bin Shan and there is a lovely sense of positivity about the ending. 5 months ago x O Amante - Simple, short and yet it packs so much elegance and details. I could see the dust dancing in the air. Amazing! 6 months ago x |