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Owl and Nightingale

CBA7 2024-02-13 10:11:46 ( reads)

Owl and Nightingale
by CBA7

Owl and nightingale
A male and a female
Sing in a fairytale
for the fairy to smile

No one but the fairy can tell
their singing is nothing but a solo
He sings all night alone
for the fairy to smile

P.S. My poem was inspired by Kang Kang's (康赛欧) lovely parrots Tian Tian (天天) and Niu Niu (牛牛). Thank you, Kang Kang, for the inspiring post you shared with us.

相关链接:【美坛综艺秀假日篇】蓝色小鹦鹉天天给牛牛唱《Merry Chrismas & Happy New Year》,并想亲吻她 - 康赛欧发表于 美语世界 - 论坛 | 文学城 (wenxuecity.com)




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盈盈一笑间

2024-02-13 11:11:02

Sing in a fairytale for the fairy to smile…lovely ~~

CBA7

2024-02-13 11:59:26

Thank you, 盈盈!

蓝灵

2024-02-13 11:33:43

In “Barnaby Rudge” Charles Dickens wondered if our

蓝灵

2024-02-13 11:35:16

better angels' brightness was fading. He might find

蓝灵

2024-02-13 11:35:43

an answer in your poem.

CBA7

2024-02-13 12:01:17

Good to know :) 谢谢蓝灵分享读后感言。

godog

2024-02-13 12:14:28

Intriguing.The poem ends but my train of thoughts continues:

CBA7

2024-02-13 12:17:38

Good question. That's some mystery, only the fairy knows :)

康赛欧

2024-02-13 12:18:36

小C的诗写得真好!谢谢喜欢牛牛和天天,他们每天都会带给我快乐。

CBA7

2024-02-13 12:22:07

谢谢康康的鼓励,谢谢天天和牛牛给我带来灵感!祝你们龙年吉祥如意,每天都欢歌笑语!

妖妖灵

2024-02-13 16:00:57

“their singing is nothing but a” duet:)

CBA7

2024-02-13 20:53:05

我初稿里的句子是“their singing is not a duet but a solo”.

妖妖灵

2024-02-14 14:41:42

哎呀,我怎么忘了我的名言:“As long as no logic,it can be a poem”:)

万湖小舟

2024-02-13 20:10:31

double thumbs up!

CBA7

2024-02-13 20:54:23

谢谢小舟鼓励。

颤音

2024-02-14 10:54:46

an interesting comparison, owl vs nightingale

CBA7

2024-02-16 20:40:41

Thank you for your feedback.