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EnLearner 2011-07-22 21:52:54 ( reads)

The Humming-bird

Of all animated beings this is the most elegant in form and the most brilliant in colors. The stones and metals polished by our arts are not comparable to(1) this jewel of Nature(2). She(3) has placed it least in size of(4) the order of birds(5), "maxime Miranda in minimis(6).". Her masterpiece is this little humming-bird, and upon it she has heaped all the gifts(7) which the other birds may only share. Lightness, rapidity, nimbleness, grace, and rich apparel(8) all belong to this little favorite. The emerald(9), the ruby(10), and the topaz(11) gleam upon its dress(12). It never soils them with the dust of earth, and in its aerial life scarcely touches the turf an instant. Always in the air, flying from flower to flower, it has their freshness as well as their brightness. It lives upon their nectar, and dwells only in the climates where they perennially bloom.


注释:

(1) are not comparable to :比不上……的。
(2) this jewel of Nature:这个大自然的珍宝。这里作者把美丽无比的蜂鸟比作大自然中的一颗天然珍宝。
(3) she :指Nature
(4) in size of :按……大小
(5) the order of birds:鸟类
(6) maxime Miranda in minimis:拉丁语 maxime解作"最大", Miranda 解作"值得称羡的东西", minimis 解作"最小"。
(7) upon it she has heaped all the gifts…:大自然赋予蜂鸟……的一切资质。
(8) rich apparel :原义为色彩鲜艳的衣服,这里借喻蜂鸟绚丽的羽毛。
(9) emerald:原义绿宝石,这里指翠绿色。
(10) ruby:原义红宝石,这里指艳红色。
(11) topaz:原义黄玉,这里指嫩黄色。
(12) dress:这里借喻蜂鸟的羽毛。


Additional words and their definitions:

being [ˈbiːɪŋ]
n
1. the state or fact of existing; existence
2. essential nature; self she put her whole being into the part
3. something that exists or is thought to exist, esp something that cannot be assigned to any category a being from outer space
4. a person; human being
5. (Philosophy) (in the philosophy of Aristotle) actuality Compare becoming [3]


creature [ˈkriːtʃə]
n
1. a living being, esp an animal
2. something that has been created, whether animate or inanimate a creature of the imagination
3. a human being; person: used as a term of scorn, pity, or endearment
4. a person who is dependent upon another; tool or puppet
[from Church Latin crēatūra, from Latin crēare to create]


species [ˈspiːʃiːz (Latin) ˈspiːʃɪˌiːz]
n pl -cies
1. (Life Sciences & Allied Applications / Biology) Biology
a. any of the taxonomic groups into which a genus is divided, the members of which are capable of interbreeding: often containing subspecies, varieties, or races. A species is designated in italics by the genus name followed by the specific name, for example Felis domesticus (the domestic cat) Abbreviation sp
b. the animals of such a group
c. any group of related animals or plants not necessarily of this taxonomic rank
2. (Life Sciences & Allied Applications / Botany) (modifier) denoting a plant that is a natural member of a species rather than a hybrid or cultivar a species clematis
3. (Philosophy / Logic) Logic a group of objects or individuals, all sharing at least one common attribute, that forms a subdivision of a genus
4. a kind, sort, or variety a species of treachery
5. (Christianity / Ecclesiastical Terms) Chiefly RC Church the outward form of the bread and wine in the Eucharist
6. Obsolete an outward appearance or form
7. Obsolete specie


heap (hp)
n.
1. A group of things placed or thrown, one on top of the other: a heap of dirty rags lying in the corner.
2. Informal A great deal; a lot. Often used in the plural: We have heaps of homework tonight.
3. Slang An old or run-down car.
tr.v. heaped, heap·ing, heaps
1. To put or throw in a pile.
2. To fill completely or to overflowing: heap a plate with vegetables.
3. To bestow in abundance or lavishly: heaped praise on the rescuers.


gift (gft)
n.
1. Something that is bestowed voluntarily and without compensation.
2. The act, right, or power of giving.
3. A talent, endowment, aptitude, or inclination.
tr.v. gift·ed, gift·ing, gifts
1. To present something as a gift to.
2. To endow with.


rap·id (rpd)
adj. rap·id·er, rap·id·est
Moving, acting, or occurring with great speed. See Synonyms at fast1.
n.
An extremely fast-moving part of a river, caused by a steep descent in the riverbed. Often used in the plural.

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[Latin rapidus, from rapere, to seize; see rep- in Indo-European roots.]

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ra·pidi·ty (r-pd-t), rapid·ness (rpd-ns) n.
rapid·ly adv.


nim·ble (nmbl)
adj. nim·bler, nim·blest
1. Quick, light, or agile in movement or action; deft: nimble fingers. See Synonyms at dexterous.
2. Quick, clever, and acute in devising or understanding: nimble wits.

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[Middle English nemel, from Old English nmel, quick to seize and numol, quick at learning; see nem- in Indo-European roots.]

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nimble·ness n.
nimbly adv.


em·er·ald (mr-ld, mrld)
n.
1. A brilliant green to grass-green transparent variety of beryl, used as a gemstone.
2. A strong yellowish green.
adj.
Of a strong yellowish green.

ru·by (rb)
n. pl. ru·bies
1. A deep red, translucent variety of the mineral corundum, highly valued as a precious stone.
2. Something, such as a watch bearing, that is made from a ruby.
3. A dark or deep red to deep purplish red.
adj.
Of the color ruby.

to·paz (tpz)
n.
1.
a. A colorless, blue, yellow, brown, or pink aluminum silicate mineral, often found in association with granitic rocks and valued as a gemstone, especially in the brown and pink varieties.
b. Any of various yellow gemstones, especially a yellow variety of sapphire or corundum.
2. A light yellow variety of quartz.
3. Either of two South American hummingbirds (Topaza pyra or T. pella) having colorful plumage.


gleam (glm)
n.
1. A brief beam or flash of light: saw gleams of daylight through the cracks.
2. A steady but subdued shining; a glow: the gleam of burnished gold.
3. A brief or dim indication; a trace: a gleam of intelligence.
v. gleamed, gleam·ing, gleams
1. To emit a gleam; flash or glow: "Their tile roofs gleamed in the moon's pallid radiance" (Laura Joh Rowland). See Synonyms at flash.
2. To be reflected as a gleam: The sun gleamed on the water.
3. To be manifested or indicated briefly or faintly.

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[Middle English glem, from Old English glm; see ghel-2 in Indo-European roots.]

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gleamer n.


soil 1 (soil)
n.
1. The top layer of the earth's surface, consisting of rock and mineral particles mixed with organic matter.
2. A particular kind of earth or ground: sandy soil.
3. Country; land: native soil.
4. The agricultural life: a man of the soil.
5. A place or condition favorable to growth; a breeding ground.

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[Middle English, from Anglo-Norman, a piece of ground (influenced in meaning by Latin solum, soil), from Latin solium, seat; see sed- in Indo-European roots.]

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soil 2 (soil)
v. soiled, soil·ing, soils
v.tr.
1. To make dirty, particularly on the surface.
2. To disgrace; tarnish: a reputation soiled by scandal.
3. To corrupt; defile.
4. To dirty with excrement.
v.intr.
To become dirty, stained, or tarnished.
n.
1.
a. The state of being soiled.
b. A stain.
2. Filth, sewage, or refuse.
3. Manure, especially human excrement, used as fertilizer.

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[Middle English soilen, from Old French souiller, from Vulgar Latin *suculre (from Late Latin suculus, diminutive of Latin ss, pig; see s- in Indo-European roots) or from souil, pigsty, wallow (from Latin solium, seat; see soil1).]

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soil 3 (soil)
tr.v. soiled, soil·ing, soils
1. To feed (livestock) with soilage.
2. To purge (livestock) by feeding with green food.

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[Origin unknown.]

aer·i·al (âr-l, -îr-l)
adj.
1. Of, in, or caused by the air.
2. Existing or living in the air.
3. Reaching high into the air; lofty.
4. Suggestive of air, as in lightness; airy.
5. Unsubstantial; imaginary.
6. Of, for, or by means of aircraft: aerial photography.
7. Botany Growing or borne above the ground or water: aerial roots.
n. (âr-l)
A radio antenna, especially one suspended in or extending into the air.

turf (tûrf)
n. pl. turfs also turves (tûrvz)
1.
a. A surface layer of earth containing a dense growth of grass and its matted roots; sod.
b. An artificial substitute for such a grassy layer, as on a playing field.
2. A piece cut from a layer of earth or sod.
3. A piece of peat that is burned for use as fuel.
4. Slang
a. The range of the authority or influence of a person, group, or thing; a bailiwick: "a bureaucracy ... concerned with turf, promotions, the budget, and protecting the retirement system" (Harper's).
b. A geographical area; a territory.
c. The area claimed by a gang, as of youths, as its personal territory.
5. Sports
a. A racetrack.
b. The sport or business of racing horses.
tr.v. turfed, turf·ing, turfs
1. To spread with turf: turfed the front yard.
2. Chiefly British Slang To displace or eject.
3. Slang To kill: "These guys can't . . . make sure nobody gets turfed" (Scott Turow).


nec·tar (nktr)
n.
1. A sweet liquid secreted by flowers of various plants, consumed by pollinators, such as hummingbirds and insects, and gathered by bees for making honey.
2. Greek & Roman Mythology The drink of the gods.
3. A delicious or invigorating drink.

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[Latin, from Greek nektar, drink of the gods; see nek-1 in Indo-European roots.]

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nectar·ous adj.


dwell (dwl)
intr.v. dwelt (dwlt) or dwelled, dwell·ing, dwells
1. To live as a resident; reside.
2. To exist in a given place or state: dwell in joy.
3.
a. To fasten one's attention: kept dwelling on what went wrong. See Synonyms at brood.
b. To speak or write at length; expatiate: dwelt on the need to trim the budget.

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[Middle English dwellen, from Old English dwellan, to mislead, delay, dwell.]

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dweller n.


per·en·ni·al (p-rn-l)
adj.
1. Lasting or active through the year or through many years.
2.
a. Lasting an indefinitely long time; enduring: perennial happiness.
b. Appearing again and again; recurrent. See Synonyms at continual.
3. Botany Living three or more years.
n.
1. Botany A perennial plant.
2. Something that recurs or seems to recur on a yearly or continual basis: "that hardy perennial, the budget deficit" (David S. Broder).

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[Latin perennis (per-, throughout; see per- + annus, year; see at- in Indo-European roots) + -al.]

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per·enni·al·ly adv.


bloom 1 (blm)
n.
1.
a. The flower of a plant.
b. Something resembling the flower of a plant: "Her hair was caught all to one side in a great bloom of frizz" (Anne Tyler).
2.
a. The condition of being in flower: a rose in full bloom.
b. A condition or time of vigor, freshness, and beauty; prime: "the radiant bloom of Greek genius" (Edith Hamilton).
3. A fresh, rosy complexion: "She was short, plump, and fair, with a fine bloom" (Jane Austen).
4.
a. A waxy or powdery whitish to bluish coating on the surface of certain plant parts, as on cabbage leaves or on a plum or grape.
b. A similar coating, as on newly minted coins.
c. Grayish blotches or streaks on the surface of chocolate produced by the formation of cocoa butter crystals.
d. Chemistry See efflorescence.
5. Glare that is caused by a shiny object reflecting too much light into a television camera.
6. A visible, colored area on the surface of bodies of water caused by excessive planktonic growth.

v. bloomed, bloom·ing, blooms
v.intr.
1.
a. To bear a flower or flowers.
b. To support plant life in abundance: rains that made the yard bloom.
2. To shine; glow.
3. To grow or flourish with youth and vigor.
4. To appear or expand suddenly: White vapor bloomed from the side of the rocket's fuel tank.
v.tr.
1. To cause to flourish.
2. Obsolete To cause to flower.




















汉译蜂鸟

在一切生物中,要算蜂鸟体型最优美、颜色最鲜艳。经过工艺加工的各种宝石和金属是无法跟这个大自然的珍宝媲美的。大自然按照鸟类的大小把它列为最小号,真是"最小的绝妙珍品"。这种小蜂鸟是大自然的杰作。大自然把其他鸟类只能分有其中一部分的种种天赋全部慷慨地给了它。这个小宠儿具有轻盈、敏捷、灵活、优雅以及羽毛绚丽等一切妙处。那翠绿的、艳红的、嫩黄色的羽毛闪闪发光。蜂鸟从不让它的羽毛沾染尘土,它生活在天空中,一刻也不碰到草皮。它总是在空中飞翔,从花丛飞向花丛;它象花一样的新鲜,又象花一样的艳丽。蜂鸟靠花蜜为生,它只生活在四季鲜花盛开的地带。
(范钜清 译)


作者简介


BUFFON,CEORGE LOUIS LECLERC, COMTEDE(1707-1788) French naturalist and writer, famous for his Histoire naturelle (36 vols, 1749-1788) written in collaboration with others and translated into many languages. His theories and speculations are important in the study of the theory of evolution.

  乔治· 路易· 勒史莱尔· 布丰伯爵(1707-1788) 法国博物学家和作家。他和别人合作编纂的三十六卷本《博物学》(1749-1788)是一部名著,被译成许多种语言。他的理论和探索是研究进化论的重要文献。

下面框框里是大家的英译总汇:

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NewVoice:

Hummingbirds

Of all the living organisms, hummingbirds have the most beautiful bodies and brightest colors. Various kinds of crafted gems and metals cannot match this treasure of the natural world. It was listed as the smallest birds of the nature based on the size – it is truly “the smallest exquisite creature”. This little hummingbird is the masterpiece of the nature. The Mother Nature has generously given all the gifts to the hummingbirds, whereas other birds only share a part of them. This favorite bird possesses all the good things - graceful, fast, flexible, and beautiful feathers. Their emerald green, bright crimson and light yellow feathers are sparkling. Hummingbirds never let its feathers contaminated with dust; it lives in the sky, and never touches the grass. It is always soaring in the air, from one flower bush to another; it is as fresh as a flower, and as pretty as a flower. Hummingbirds live on the nectars of flowers, so they can only live in places with blooming flowers for all four seasons.

newton123:

译The Humming-bird

Among all living things, a huming bird can be counted the most elegant in body shape, and the most colorful. The processed gems and metals have no way to compete with this natural beauty. Its size is the smallest in the catalog of birds, a genuin precious miniature. This is a masterpiece of the mother nature. She awards it all talents which are partially shared by the others. This creature is light, agile, flexible, elegant, colorful and so on. The emerald green, bright scarlet, light yellow feathers flick in the sunlight. A huming bird never allows its feathers to be contaminated with dust. It lives in the air, with no moment in touch with ground. It is always moving in the air, from one flower to another. It is as fresh as flowers and as gorgeous as flowers. A huming bird lives on nectars so it inhabits only in areas of perennial booming.


lmao:


Among all living beings, the one with the most elegant figure and the most splendid color is no other than the humming-bird. No artificial jewels or metals can compare with this natural beauty. Based the size, the humming bird is categorized by nature as the smallest bird, a true “tiniest wonder”. The humming-bird is a masterpiece of the Nature, who generously gives it all the talents of which other birds can only share a part. This little darling has all the best qualities such as being light, swift, flexible and elegant as well as splendid in color. The jade green, bright red, fresh yellow feathers glitter with light. The humming-bird never gets its feathers dusted. Living in the sky, it never touches the lawn. It is always flying in the air, from one bed of flower to another. It is as fresh and glorious as the flowers. The bees live on the honey while the humming-bird lives with the flowers.

同学小薇 :


Hummingbird

Out of all living creatures, hummingbird is considered the most beautiful and colorful. No man-made precious gems and metals are comparable with its beauty. It is the smallest in size hence considered the smallest treasure. Generously given all the talents, hummingbirds are considered the masterpiece of Mother Nature. The little darling obtains all the advantages such as light, agility, flexibility, elegance as well as the colorful feathers. The green, red and yellow colored feathers shine as hummingbirds always live in the sky without touching the dust and grass. They always fly, from flower to flower. Bright and fresh as flowers, the hummingbirds live on nectar so they are only living in the areas where of flowers blossom all the time.


beautifulwind:


Among all of the living creatures, the humming bird is the one which is most graceful in shape and bright in color. All kinds of precious stones refined by art processing are uncomparable to this natural treasure. The nature lists it as the smallest one according to the size of birds, so it is the smallest fantastic treasure. This kind of humming-bird is the masterpiece of the nature. The nature generously assigned all kinds of talent, which only partially owned by some other birds, to humming-bird. This litte pet has all of the charactristics such as light, sharp, flexible,elegant and feather brilliant,etc. The light-geen, red, fresh-yellow colored feathers sparkle brightly. The humming bird has never allowed its feather to be stained with any dirt. It lives in the air, and has never touched any grass. It always flies in the air from one cluster of flowers to another. It is as fresh as flowers, and as brilliant as flowers. The humming-bird makes a living with honey, and it only lives in zones with flowers in all seasons.


jennea:


Among all creatures, Hummingbird is the smallest in size and the most vivid in color. The artificially processed precious stones and metals can never compete with the beauty of this treasure made by nature. As nature’s smallest bird in size, Hummingbird really is the “smallest gem, ” a true masterpiece of nature. While other birds can only have some, Hummingbird is given all kinds of gifts by nature generously. This little darling is light, swift, nimble, graceful and has magnificent feathers, which sparkle with emerald green, bright red and tender yellow colors. Hummingbird never lets its feathers gather any dust because it lives in the sky and never touches the grass. It always flies in the air, from blossom to blossom, as fresh and colorful as flowers. It lives by nectar of flowers, and only appears in areas where flowers bloom in all seasons.


EnLearner:


The Humming-bird

Of all the species, it's the humming-bird that has the most beautiful figure and is the vividest in color. No artificially-crafted precious stone or metal are comparable with this precious treasure of the mother nature. The mother nature categories the humming-bird as the smallest bird, and it really is "the smallest wonderful treasure". The little humming-bird is a masterpiece of the mother nature. The mother nature generously grants all the talents to the humming-bird while other birds can only have some them. This little treasure is light, agile, flexiable and elegant, and its feathers are vivid in color. Its green, bright red and yellow feathers are shining. The humming-bird never let its features touch the dust, livifng in the air and always staying away from turf. It always flies in the air, from flowers to flowers; and it is not only as fresh as flowers but also as vivid as flowers. The humming-bird relies on nectar, living only in the areas that are blooming all the seasons.


bolang


Hummingbird: (translation)

Amony all the creatures, hummingbirds have the most graceful shapes and most brightful colors. Nothing can match the precious nature species, even the various precious stones and mentals processed by technologies. Nature has classified hummingbird as the smallest bird by the size, which is truly the tiny treasure. Hummingbird is the masterpiece of the nature. Nature gives all of the gifts which only partiall shown in other birds to hummingbird. It has all the wonderful features like: light, fast, skillfull, elegent and bright. It’s bright green, scarlet, yellow feathers shine brightly. Hummingbird does not let any dirt resident in it feathers; it lives in sky, never touches grass. It flies from flowers to flowers, as fresh as flowers, and as colorful as flowers. Hummingbird feeds on flower honey, it onlys lives at the places where flowers bloom all the seasons.



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跟帖(44)

beautifulwind

2011-07-22 23:09:48

愚教授辛苦了!我都快忘了今天是周五了,周末愉快!鸟类是the order of birds,学习了!

NewVoice

2011-07-23 04:43:27

回复:愚教授辛苦了!我都快忘了今天是周五了,周末愉快!鸟类是the order of birds,学习了!

非文学青年

2011-07-23 08:04:17

学习了!谢谢姐姐!

NewVoice

2011-07-23 17:07:16

妹妹嘴好甜, 周末鱼块!

beautifulwind

2011-07-23 19:36:09

听生物专家讲生物的英语专业术语真是一种享受。学习了!谢谢新声姐!

EnLearner

2011-07-23 21:17:02

多些美风助教。忘了周末,可能玩得太开心了吧。

beautifulwind

2011-07-23 21:23:57

正好相反。俺今天还上了一天的班。周末愉快。

EnLearner

2011-07-23 21:53:18

谢谢。辛苦了。

NewVoice

2011-07-23 03:19:47

再次感谢大智若愚教授! 最近几次练习的文章都很美,

非文学青年

2011-07-23 08:05:36

深有同感!

cha-cha

2011-07-23 18:15:53

换句话说,能不能来个俗点的?跟咱们老百姓日子比较贴近的?

EnLearner

2011-07-23 20:55:02

谢谢好奇的邻居。能否说具体一点,什么才算近今生活的?

EnLearner

2011-07-23 20:36:56

多谢支持鼓励!

非文学青年

2011-07-23 21:26:41

愚教授,我个人喜欢句法结构好(basic padderns,哈哈),动词短语用得好的东东

beautifulwind

2011-07-23 21:29:50

for example?

EnLearner

2011-07-23 21:52:26

知道了,谢谢。

非文学青年

2011-07-23 22:09:13

我奉献一个?这个我读了原文以后觉得很好,就是没法跟着翻译了,这个有音频。

beautifulwind

2011-07-23 22:18:57

我的妈呀。咋比愚公的更难。这俩教授,一个比一个会整人!

EnLearner

2011-07-23 22:34:25

其实我在想,是不是我们论流来当叫兽?

非文学青年

2011-07-23 22:37:36

这个主意不错!就是你做的这个帖子太好了,我们都望尘莫及。

EnLearner

2011-07-23 22:49:17

这个只要大家喜欢都可用的。

EnLearner

2011-07-23 22:36:26

这象是VOA里面的?

非文学青年

2011-07-23 22:38:35

恩,你读过?我那天练快速练它来着。

EnLearner

2011-07-23 22:46:49

你在这论坛search一下"排行金曲"就知道了。

NewVoice

2011-07-24 03:37:21

我喜欢高雅的。至少要装一装。我很喜欢前几篇,只是它们风格类似。

EnLearner

2011-07-24 10:07:07

谢谢。

同学小薇

2011-07-23 06:59:27

Thanks YuGong! One question in the original work...

非文学青年

2011-07-23 08:03:30

我觉得是scarely touches the turf (for) an instant, 省略for

同学小薇

2011-07-23 11:03:15

Yes I agree with you.

beautifulwind

2011-07-23 20:02:16

谢谢文青,也解决了俺的疑惑!

EnLearner

2011-07-23 20:25:09

Here are what I found.

beautifulwind

2011-07-23 20:31:33

如果这样,for 可以省略吗?

EnLearner

2011-07-23 20:42:24

个人认为 even 倒可以省略, 少了even,语气略为弱一些。

beautifulwind

2011-07-23 20:48:02

所以for是不应省略的?原文给错了?

EnLearner

2011-07-23 20:58:12

丝乎是这样的,有空可再research一下。

非文学青年

2011-07-23 21:06:50

似乎省略有点怪

EnLearner

2011-07-23 21:21:00

not even for an instance 做状语用。

非文学青年

2011-07-23 22:17:26

我刚才没说清楚

EnLearner

2011-07-23 22:29:00

I see.

非文学青年

2011-07-23 22:40:57

是滴。后来就不理他了,让他陪娃去了。哈哈。

非文学青年

2011-07-23 08:12:52

Great job, Yugong! I really appreciate it!

EnLearner

2011-07-23 21:00:49

Thank you, Prof. Fei.

jennea

2011-07-23 21:09:36

Thanks YuGong!

EnLearner

2011-07-23 21:18:42

谢谢jennea,周末愉快!