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sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations!

bearsback 2010-06-23 18:45:09 ( reads)

I love your insight!

let's me try the second stanza:

简陋的小屋
点缀着
碧绿的秧禾

simple shacks
ornament
a green paddy field

or

humble huts
ornament
a green paddy field

or

one or two shacks
ornament
a green paddy field

or
a humble hut
....

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bearsback

2010-06-23 18:57:03

回复:sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations!

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 19:48:21

thanks.

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:20:55

回复:thanks.

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 19:43:11

都不错。like the 1st 2 best.

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:15:27

now, like all of them:):)

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:36:18

回复:now, like all of them:):)

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:51:36

有道理。:) 谢好译

bearsback

2010-06-23 22:06:20

直译

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 22:42:34

更直的。。

bearsback

2010-06-23 23:04:34

hahaha, I love it

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:39:35

宝贝

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:44:47

hahahaha... ok

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:25:25

回复:都不错。like the 1st 2 best.