祝贺你进步很大!我的一点商榷
武都水坝
2010-11-26 09:45:18
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祝贺你进步很大!我的一点商榷
Things conceiled gradually get clear
Thousands of words turn into silence
Love is a superstition with right time and right place
Oh, so you are here too
该隐瞒的事总清晰, 千言万语只能无语
爱是天时地利的迷信, 喔 原来你也在这里
My version:
The concealed things’always gradually become clear
Thousands of words only turm into silence
Love is a superstition in the right place at the right time
Oh,so you are here,too.
戏雨飞鹰
2010-11-26 11:00:28谢谢武都，你的版本更加精确的表达了原文的意思和语气,非常感谢。