热恋中... 能否有人帮忙修改一下？谢谢！！！！

In love

Please!
Please take me away!
Your words of love have captured me
Make me yours
Make me yours

I didn’t ever dream
I didn’t ever dream
That one day I would fall into this river
Being bathed in its holy crystal water
Heart purified
Ice melted
... into tears, tears of rejoicing
I’m a drop of water in this river
This river

Beside the river I’m undressed
by your gentle fingers
I\'ve divested myself of those clothes
Clothes of untrue
of untrue

Please take me away
Please take me away
Take me to your heaven
Take me to your little cottage in the forest
Where the birds singing
Where the deers dancing
Where the flowers blooming
Where the fairies blessing
And I’m hearing
I’m feeling
The tide rising
The tide falling