【天玉之近体诗绝句八首】48 小时 平水五歌韵

    These are some Chinese metrical poems that I recently wrote. It was a fun rhyme poetry game played with four other poetry friends. Our Ying Ying was one of them.  

     We have  48 hours to compose, using Pingshui rhyme system, "Wu Ge" rhymes, about 20-30 words to choose from. The word assigned to me is Ge, which means each of my poems must contain the word 歌. Some describe writing metrical poems is like dancing with chains on your ankles. The game that we played is like dancing with heavy chains on both our ankles and arms : ) These are the eight quatrains that I wrote. I finally had a taste of the ancient poets' so called body slimming 苦吟 experience. Although the slimming part may not be as effective as running, I did get my fair share of the bitterness and sweetness during the writing process ~ ~

    I suggest playing the Chinese classical music attached below and drinking some green tea while reading the poems, to get the full experience ～

 

 

分韵诗歌游戏，在48小时内写出，用平水韵“五歌”韵，每首需含 “歌”字，这是我写的八首绝句，尝了一下古人“苦吟”的滋味 ～～

     【天玉之近体诗绝句八首】

 

 

1。

       【五绝】画眉            

泉水润双娥，青枝婉啭歌。

语多笼里哑，空谷惠风和。

 

 

 

2。

          【七绝】玉青河

月下无声一棹歌，水波微漾玉青河。                      

菰蒲深处心音振，柔了时光意渐酡。

 

 

 

3。

           【七绝】潇湘怨

曾是檀栾青郁翠，萧萧凤尾蹭欢歌。

子规夜夜啼无寐，似唤还吾宝玉哥。

 

 

 

4。

             【七绝】情渡

纯真不齿唱浮歌，相悦知音雪雨磨。

阅尽古今千百事，最难负载渡情波。

 

 

 

5。

 

      【五绝】鸳鸯

无谱水边歌，缘深入碧河。

一番风雨后，浊去拨清波。

 

 

6。

            【七绝】婆娑             

在君眼底舞婆娑，因解晴眸从未挪。

七色花香旋汝醉，灵犀一点蝶扇歌。

 

 

7。

        【七绝】嵩山仙境

 

江湖沉起菀枯歌，良莠闲人走马过。

花蝶酒香仙一境，师师轻倚燕青哥。

 

 

 

8。

 

       【五绝】远眺                                

月洒陈年酒，涛吟反复歌。

启窗天海阔，落日与君多。

 

 

             

 

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