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haha 宝贝，我刷碗还没吃饭呢

bearsback 2010-06-23 13:01:06 ( reads)

Lets me try the first stanza:

清澈的小河
依偎着
起伏的山壑

a clear creek
clinges
to the rolling valleys

(possibly heaving valleys as well)

sweetie, please notice alliteration:)

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戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 13:15:35

A good beginning

bearsback

2010-06-23 13:24:10

sweetie, let's help15 run the remaining

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 16:45:06

help15 is great. 据说她刚买了３块bricks。

bearsback

2010-06-23 18:45:47

haha, then time for her to show off:)

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 13:27:37

the alliteration"clear creek clinges" 真的有种

bearsback

2010-06-23 13:54:26

sharp ears

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 14:00:59

在这句里，我喜欢

bearsback

2010-06-23 14:09:20

回复：在这句里，我喜欢

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 17:15:28

你好厉害！PFPF.

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 18:24:30

对不起啊，bear。我是瞎说一通。haha。

help15

2010-06-23 18:41:14

都是我借你一块砖给闹的, 哼, 还回来! haha.

bearsback

2010-06-23 18:47:01

you were absolutely right when you said

bearsback

2010-06-23 18:49:51

回复：对不起啊，bear。我是瞎说一通。haha。

bearsback

2010-06-23 18:45:09

sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations!

bearsback

2010-06-23 18:57:03

回复：sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations!

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 19:48:21

thanks.

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:20:55

回复：thanks.

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 19:43:11

都不错。like the 1st 2 best.

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:15:27

now, like all of them:):)

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:36:18

回复：now, like all of them:):)

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:51:36

有道理。:) 谢好译

bearsback

2010-06-23 22:06:20

直译

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 22:42:34

更直的。。

bearsback

2010-06-23 23:04:34

hahaha, I love it

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:39:35

宝贝

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:44:47

hahahaha... ok

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:25:25

回复：都不错。like the 1st 2 best.