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i've read your poem many times now

falsetruth 2010-11-25 21:48:07 ( reads)

rain, snow, sleet or hail

wind will quest with your sail

untold a beautiful story

unfolds only in memory

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戏雨飞鹰

2010-11-26 06:51:51

great poem. 开诗歌班偶也报名。

戏雨飞鹰

2010-11-26 08:25:32

3rd line

falsetruth

2010-11-26 10:43:00

3rd line

戏雨飞鹰

2010-11-26 11:07:20

oh, i see. thanks.

falsetruth

2010-11-26 11:50:33

would be 'an untold':)

戏雨飞鹰

2010-11-26 12:02:45

haha, 对。不能怪我,我初中没毕业。

戏雨飞鹰

2010-11-26 08:34:16

我今天听了几只中国歌,

falsetruth

2010-11-26 10:47:45

Interesting. Thank you for letting me know. I didn't realize tha