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致少女 For My Love 作者:元梁,翻译:美坛奇葩

美坛奇葩 2010-06-22 13:32:58 ( reads)

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诗歌:致少女 -- 献给莹莹
 作者:元梁
 诗歌:For My Love -- Dedicated to Ying Ying
 翻译:美坛奇葩; 艺术创作:婉蕠


清澈的小河
依偎着
起伏的山壑

A clear river
Winding with
A gully in the mountains

简陋的小屋
点缀着
碧绿的秧禾

Simple shanties
Dotting the
Green landscape

扬鞭的小童
吆喝着
笨重的牛车

Whip-flipping kids
Tending their
Heavy oxcarts

飞舞的小鸟
斑斓着
茂密的枝柯

Flying birds
Coloring
Dense leaves and branches

秀美的少女
欢喜这
田园的春色

A beautiful girl
Is taking pleasure
In the scenes of nature

俏丽的面庞
纯净的眼波
你, 却是我的天国

Your pretty face
And innocent glances
Make my kingdom of heaven

哦, 可爱的姑娘
你象那安详的白鸽
一切神情
都那么温柔, 平和

Oh, my lovely girl
Peaceful as a dove
Your expression
Is gentle and calm

哦, 亲爱的姑娘
你如那优雅的天鹅
每个姿态
都那么高贵, 独特

Oh, my dear girl
Graceful as a swan
Every gesture of yours
Is noble and unique

多么希望 ----
这爱意始萌的欢乐
在此铭刻
你的笑靨
将永远珍放在
我心中的像册

How much I hope --
My joy of sprouting love
Is here inscribed
And your smile
Will always remain
In my heart's album

多么盼望 ----
这爱意始萌的欢乐
此水长歌
你的情怀
将永久难忘在
我未来的生活

How much I expect --
That my joy of budding love
Will with the river persist
And your image
In my whole life
Will never faint

多想就这样陪着你呵
好像苍山伴着青河 …

I am dreaming to be with you forever
Just like green mountains with the clear river …

********

元梁/Yuan Liang
Beijing. May 1, 1980.

Translation: 美坛奇葩
Artistic Design: 婉蕠
@WXC. June 22, 2010./>

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跟帖(53)

美坛奇葩

2010-06-22 13:37:13

Thank 婉蕠 for the artistic design !!!

婉蕠

2010-06-22 15:59:27

美坛奇葩,感谢你为美语坛的网友们翻译了无数的作品。

千与.千寻

2010-06-22 14:50:35

经典的美贴,这个要鼎!

婉蕠

2010-06-22 16:00:10

谢谢小千。祝你夏天快乐。

水中捞月

2010-06-22 16:34:07

奇葩添异彩,美坛更娇艳,鼎!

婉蕠

2010-06-22 17:07:27

好诗句。

bearsback

2010-06-22 17:57:30

better

help15

2010-06-22 18:31:27

excepting your version. houhou!

help15

2010-06-23 12:23:30

oops,w.w.

美坛奇葩

2010-06-23 13:27:14

What is o o p s , w . w . ?

help15

2010-06-23 19:18:15

wrong words.

美坛奇葩

2010-06-24 05:32:59

Thanks. I thought it was a World War.

help15

2010-06-24 09:08:41

hope there will be an English wording war in this forum. hehe

美坛奇葩

2010-06-23 07:10:22

It is your turn now.

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 10:38:16

yes, bear, it is your turn. :) i'm waiting for your v1

bearsback

2010-06-23 13:01:06

haha 宝贝,我刷碗还没吃饭呢

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 13:15:35

A good beginning

bearsback

2010-06-23 13:24:10

sweetie, let's help15 run the remaining

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 16:45:06

help15 is great. 据说她刚买了3块bricks。

bearsback

2010-06-23 18:45:47

haha, then time for her to show off:)

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 13:27:37

the alliteration"clear creek clinges" 真的有种

bearsback

2010-06-23 13:54:26

sharp ears

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 14:00:59

在这句里,我喜欢

bearsback

2010-06-23 14:09:20

回复:在这句里,我喜欢

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 17:15:28

你好厉害!PFPF.

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 18:24:30

对不起啊,bear。我是瞎说一通。haha。

help15

2010-06-23 18:41:14

都是我借你一块砖给闹的, 哼, 还回来! haha.

bearsback

2010-06-23 18:47:01

you were absolutely right when you said

bearsback

2010-06-23 18:49:51

回复:对不起啊,bear。我是瞎说一通。haha。

bearsback

2010-06-23 18:45:09

sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations!

bearsback

2010-06-23 18:57:03

回复:sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations!

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 19:48:21

thanks.

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:20:55

回复:thanks.

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 19:43:11

都不错。like the 1st 2 best.

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:15:27

now, like all of them:):)

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:36:18

回复:now, like all of them:):)

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:51:36

有道理。:) 谢好译

bearsback

2010-06-23 22:06:20

直译

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 22:42:34

更直的。。

bearsback

2010-06-23 23:04:34

hahaha, I love it

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:39:35

宝贝

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 21:44:47

hahahaha... ok

bearsback

2010-06-23 21:25:25

回复:都不错。like the 1st 2 best.

元梁

2010-06-22 21:20:25

才看见,,真美啊!太感激奇葩兄的美译了!同时感谢婉蕠妹妹的美贴!

婉蕠

2010-06-23 06:55:15

问候元梁,谢谢你的好诗。祝你夏安。

元梁

2010-06-22 21:24:27

这好像不是新版的,要不要我再把新版的诗词贴出来?再次深深地感谢仁兄和大家!

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 10:40:30

beautiful! final, star? :)

美坛奇葩

2010-06-23 11:11:59

I have handed in my homework.

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 11:50:08

you did a wonderful job. you got A plus..

美坛奇葩

2010-06-23 11:58:18

回复:

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 13:19:17

hehehe... i expect your goal is "++" or "+++"

美坛奇葩

2010-06-23 13:26:14

See you in Los Angeles.

戏雨飞鹰

2010-06-23 13:31:22

wowow, it is Los Angeles. hahaha. yes, i am waiting LA